Timon dikrol, a high school student is faced with some life changing e

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Synopsis

Chapter 1 - Chapter one

Plot

(A beautiful view of New York city, the view of the bright skies down to the tall buildings, moving vehicles and people going about their various activities.)

[Voice of protagonist]:- Hi, ok you might all be thinking, "who the f**k is this guy, like what am I seeing right now, and then you might wanna look away, but don't, this is an amazing story of me, and now you will be like "who are you"?. well only one way to find out who I am, and what this story is about. well people, this, is the INTROVERT, which is well, me. and this is my WILLY NILLY STORY.

(A tall teen in uniform is constantly kicking another student lying on the floor, cheers are becoming rampant from other student, all eyes are on the enforcer and the enforced)

[Tall teen] :- huh, huh---(chanting in anger) you little f**k

[Voice of protagonist] :- you might also be wondering why that tall dude with sexy eyes is beating up that other dude on the floor. well, let's back up a bit to the beginning of my story.

(1st February of 2022)

(A messed up room filled with cloths and books, the walls are decorated with pictures of superman)

[Timon]:- (sleeping recklessly at the edge of his bed)

(The alarm immediately starts ringing)

[Timon]:- (rotates to the center of the bed, then sits up) urrh, freaking alarm (looks at the alarm to his right on a table close to his bed) nine thirty (says reluctantly) nine thirty (repeats slowly) nine thirty (gets off his bed) nine thirty!

[Voice of protagonist]:- my name, is Timon Dikrol.

[Timon]:- (rushes into the bathroom)

[Voice of protagonist]:- and i woke up really late on a school day, for the first time in my...oh, sorry, no lying (chuckles) more like everyday of my life as I can remember.

[A tall black woman with a buzz cut immediately opens the door and walks in)

[Mrs dikrol]:- (storms out) timon! what the hell are you doing in the bathroom. why can't you be like other normal kids and wake up... and get ready before nine thirty!?

[Timon]:- (brushing his teeth quickly)

[Mrs dikrol]:- you better get ready before ten, or you will be sorry. what a kid (mutters to herself and walks out shutting the door behind her)

[Timon]:- (rushes out from the bathroom in his underwear and starts dressing quickly)

[Voice of protagonist]:- I didn't take my bath, and belief me, that was not my first, as I noticed it wasn't that big of a deal for me in school.

[Timon]:- (picks up his bag and puts some books in it, and walks out, then down the stairs quickly) mom, am ready.

[Mrs dikrol]:- (walks out the kitchen)

[Voice of protagonist]:- That's my mom, she's a black, and that is one of the things I got from her. and just so you know, we met under normal circumstances, the giving birth, then after some month to maybe years, I called her mom, she's amazing, little aggressive at times, but I love her.

[Mrs dikrol]:- you didn't have your bath

[Timon]:- mom, you said leave before ten.

[Mrs dikrol]:- yeah, that doesn't mean,(changes her voice in an annoying manner) don't take your bath

[Timon]:- (walks close to her) mom, don't worry, I'll be fine, am really late

[Mrs dikrol]:- (gives him a bag) your launch

[Timon]:- (takes it) what is it?

[Mrs dikrol]:- The usual (draws her words and smiles)

[Voice of protagonist]:- The usual, vegetable sandwich. urrh! I hate those

[Timon]:- (smiles at her) love it.

[Mrs dikrol]:- Now make sure you have your lunch and nothing else.

[Timon]:- Alright, bye (turns and starts walking towards the door)

[Mrs dikrol]:- Timon! (calls out)

[Timon]:- (turns and looks at her)

[Mrs dikrol]:- (gets serious) you have that sandwich or you would be sorry. I love you (smiles)

[Timon]:- (walks out and looks around, runs to his right, then stops) nope (shakes his head then looks to his left) shortcut

(A man in a bald, on a white pyjamas walks out from his house and picks up a newspaper)

[Mr Alfred]:- (looks to his left) kiddo! (smiles and spreads his arms)

[Timon]:- (looks at him) oh, good morning Mr Alfred

[Voice of protagonist]:- Mr Alfred, more like Mr inquisitive, he's our neighbor, more like our only neighbor, this guy ask so many questions, my mom avoids him all the time, and I don't really blame her.

[Mr Alfred]:- morning, how did you sleep?

[Timon]:- awesome (smiles) I need to go to school, am really late.

[Mr Alfred]:- hmm, same school or new one?

[Timon]:- same

[Mr Alfred]:- why did you wake up so late? (asks quickly)

[Timon]:- well...

[Mr Alfred]:- (cuts in) did your mom wake up so late too?

[Timon]:- ok (smiles) I gotta go (starts running to his left)

[Mr Alfred]:- (screams at the top of his voice) hey, you off to school or something? (turns and starts walking to his door, but stops) what was I doing out here? (says to himself in confusion then looks at the papers in his hand) oh (walks into his house and shuts the door behind him.)

This is my first story, and I thank you for reading this chapter till the end. Pls share what you think with me, the points you didn't like, and how you think I can improve.