Thanks for reading my very first novel.....
So, before you go through Chapters or even if you had already gone through, Please read below.
First, This Novel is fast paced in Intial phase as I wanted readers to understand the world better without adding sophisticated details like you will find in my other novels.
Second, Chapters are short, reason, to not make thing boring, my main focus was on small events that have major roles in the Novel, giving a vague understanding to the readers about exactly what this whole story is about, the real story begins in Volume 2.
So, is Volume 1 is only extra?, No!
Volume 1 is written with keeping in mind that normally readers get bored with reading long comprehension like paragraphs, and slowly loose interest.
My main focus was on balanced comedy and also to not make MC look stupid at the same time.
Third, Some Plots are really confusing like about his Mother thing and then that not suddenly breaking Engagement of his fiancee and all, Reason
Place yourself in his position and imagine what will happen if you got thrown in a novel as a fat villain.
Will you get rid of that fat body of yours that didn't allow you to even take two steps or deal with breaking an engagement with a girl??
But didn't she killed the MC, No!
In a Paragraph it was mentioned, Real Zephyr was not an angel either like there was a reason he was a villain to begin with, either his mistreatment from mother or over care from his father had mold him into a rude young master.
For Example -- If he wanted he could atleast take some steps regularly to keep his body in check.
About his Mother business, Imagine in this life you got a very caring mother, and in a novel you read about how cindrella was mistreated by her mother and one day you find yourself as her.
What will you do, take revenge on her mother.
why?, How?, And After that?.
Why?, She didn't tortured you but real one.
How?, With that weak body of yours.
After that?, Took revenge and got thrown outside house.
What will you do after that, earn money and live happy ever after —
Do you even know about outside world except that Prince and cindrella's glass sandle....
There were witches too, not everyone gonna give you a pumpkin Carriage!!.
Cough....I know, it's feels cringe about what rubbish, I am going on about but I don't know!, Why people don't understand Zeph's Condition.
Kassidy is a Duchess!!!!!
If she can throw him away once, she can kill him too.
He is not stupid, he knows when to bow, do you want him to directly go and talk rudely with her and gave a loud slap for mistreating her child and then after found himself in some dungeon being used as a mana mine.
Then,What about Zeph's,Motherly Feeling, Really Guys,
Did anyone of you noticed, Zeph never asked for any favour from her but tried a business deal, even with Lily's case he wanted to give mana stones, it shows he just call her mother due to unconcious mind state the previous owner's mind.
Ofcourse, He can control it but is it really necessary, can't he just use the resources of a Duchess.
Do you think, Kassidy would have send him to academy on her own recommendation if he acted all high and mighty.
About Thalia, she is beautiful, she has overpowered abilities and above all her Physical strength is weakest among all heroines, So, Why Zeph will kill her.
"haaa...haaa.....My fingers hurt "
In Volume 2 that is going On right now, there will be several plot reveals and things that will clear the remaining doubts in readers mind.
And by the way, I meant to ask, Readers don't you think that if I wrote what is about to happen in future all the upcoming spoilers are revealed right?.
Really Guys,.....Sigh
Just seat tight and read it, No super short chapters, Full Explanation, No Confusing Plots and With improved Writing skills,
Venture in the Journey of a FAT VILLAIN.
but, isn't he got slim??,
Who knows on demand of readers, I can just make him fat again, HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!