Azoroth

how can I not give it five stars if it's an amazing fanfic, plus it's an overlord fanfic, keep up the good work author

Nice, can't wait for the next chapter. There's some minor mistakes, but overall it's good. There's room for improvement anyways so I hope you continue your good work.

It's a promising story, but the only problem I have is the lack of conversations, but it's just the Beginning of the story so I hope the author will impress me.

add tags please. (I'm sure it increases the flow of readers)................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

The story is your generic overlord fanfiction along with inevitable droppage. Honestly it isn't too bad, it's readable in a grammatical sense,  but the voice/narration used in the story is terrible. 

"Welcome to the 11th floor of Nazarick, or as I like to call it, my super cool crib. Seriously, everything you see here is a result of my wild imagination from that big red moon hanging out in the sky like it owns the place to the palace that screams "Vampires rule!" Why stick to just training and being all serious when you can have fun, right? Gotta keep those thoughts of tomorrow at bay somehow."

I know each author has their own writing style but constantly talking to your readers like this is off putting and unbearable. Don't write like this unless you know what you're doing.

Hello, as the author of this story, I want to share that my primary goal in writing this fic is to enhance my proficiency in the English language. The story's progression may be slow, with the first 15+ chapters primarily serving as information and world-building. If you're looking for action, romance, and comedy, I recommend starting to read this fic once it reaches at least 30+ chapters. Your understanding and patience are greatly appreciated as I work to develop the story further. Thank you for your support and interest in my writing journey.❤

bro it like reading an advertisement about a house and how grate the house is where the action

dropped fic

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Inventory