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"Behind you, Elsa!" Suddenly, both Elsa and Jin heard Anna's voice from somewhere not far away from them.
Looking up, Elsa saw Anna standing on top of a branch of a tree, while pointing behind her.
"Anna?!" Ignoring what she was pointing at, Elsa was shocked to find Anna in the same place as her! She made sure to leave the room without waking her up!
However, it was too late for her to react when Jin placed his finger near her neck and whispered to her.
"I would like to add one rule. No matter what happens, never give up. Villains tend to monologue so much that they would always give time for their enemies to prepare and fight back. So, no matter what happens, the moment your enemy starts monologuing like this, you should strike back and st-." Just as Jin was explaining a new rule to her, Elsa immediately gets what he was explaining to her and since he's basically monologuing like the villain that he's referring to, Elsa quickly pushed Jin back and stomped her foot on the ground, forming an icy ground that is both slippery and shiny.
"Alright. I wasn't expecting that." Jin said when he saw that the ground had changed to ice, including the trees and grasses. Transforming the entire area to a frozen land. Tilting the environmental advantage to Elsa's favour.
"Thanks for the tip." Elsa smirked in victory as she raised her palm and created several ice spears that were conjured from her palm.
'Since when did she learn how to do that?!' Jin complained inside his mind as he watched those ice spears fly towards him in a fast manner.
'Fire wall should be enough.' Jin said to himself before pushing his arm forward on the ground, blasting flames out of his fist that soon made a large wall in front of him, melting those ice spears that were planning to attack him.
Suddenly, Jin saw an ice spear peeking out on the edge of the wall before it dashed towards him.
'She's learning, huh?' Jin said to himself before manipulating the fire wall to form a fire storm that melted not only the ice spear that peeked but also the icy environment as Elsa simply stopped in her tracks and just stared at the flame storm in shock and fear.
*Fwooosshh!*
"He doesn't really show mercy, does he? Perhaps we should stop him?" Anna forcefully smiled as she thought that Jin was going all out in this battle while Tigress simply side-eyed her.
As if she was saying, 'What do you mean mercy? He isn't even trying!' However, Tigress kept these thoughts to herself lest she might hurt Anna's feelings of thinking that her sister is very strong.
"Don't worry, have trust in him. If he wanted her dead, he could have done it a long time ago." Tigress simply assured her.
Seeing the large flame storm, Elsa seemed to have given you and simply closed her eyes.
"That was good, Elsa." Suddenly, Elsa heard Jin's voice.
Opening her eyes, she saw Jin standing in front of her while raising his thumbs up, without any sight of the flame storm.
".....Thanks." Elsa blushed slightly as she looked away and said.
"However, in times like that, you should never back down and never give up!" Jin nodded his head at her before pointing his finger upward and yelled like a sergeant officer.
Elsa was stunned, why does she feel like she's training like a knight in an army?
"Say it Elsa. Never back down, never what?" Jin said before yelling on the top of his lungs.
"Uhmm, never give up?" Elsa meekly whispered as she felt shy on matching Jin's volume.
"I can't hear you, never back down, never what?" Jin yelled again, making Elsa's blood boil.
"Never give up!" Elsa slightly increased her volume and yelled.
"Alright! That's the spirit!" Jin grinned and clapped his hands as Elsa heavily exhaled and inhaled, feeling the sense of euphoria due to yelling on the top of her lungs for the first time.
"How does it feel?" Jin saw the adrenaline rush plastered all over Elsa's body, so he asked.
"I feel so good! It's like I could take on mountains." Elsa answered before chuckling.
"That's your adrenaline. It gives you a boost in all aspects of your strength. It's a good thing to master." Jin said, naturally he has mastered on activating his adrenaline whenever he wants however the side effects are enormous as after you deactivate the adrenaline, all the exhaustion and pain that is accumulated during the session would suddenly pour all over you like a tide, making you pass out if your will is not strong enough. Of course, Jin wouldn't tell Elsa about that, let her try it first and if she masters it, only then he would tell her about it.
"Adrenaline...." Elsa muttered to herself. To be honest, the sound of it sounds both cool but dangerous. Elsa is not dumb, the so-called adrenaline is like pushing your body to its limits, which means there would be side effects.
"You know, I didn't expect your powers to be this powerful. Given enough everyday practice, no doubt you would be able to heal your sister in just 5 days." Jin said, making Elsa beamed up in excitement and due to that, she unknowingly hugged Jin and thanked him.
"Thank you!....Jin. You don't know how much Anna is worth to me. If she dies because of me, I don't know what will happen to me." Elsa said as tears flowed down from her eyes, the thought of causing her sister's death has been weighing down on her like Atlas carrying the weight of the world on his shoulders.
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"I won!" Olaf raised his arms up in the sky as he excitedly made a victory pose.
"Beginners luck." Tigress muttered and looked away, not wanting to accept defeat from a mere snowman.
Meanwhile, Rapunzel was wide-eyed and stared at the scene in shock. Not from how she lost the bet but the fact that why does Jin seem to keep on attracting many women to him? Especially a princess like her. Rapunzel can't even tell if Jin is doing it on purpose or if someone else outside is manipulating it.
[Author: Heh.]
At the same time, Anna quickly climbed down the tree or more like she jumped from the branch and landed on the ground without suffering any injury.
"Elsa!" Anna ran towards Elsa in full speed as tears were flowing down on her cheeks.
"Anna?" Elsa turned around quickly when she heard Anna's voice and as soon as she did, Anna immediately crushed into her, causing them to fall towards Jin who for some unknown reason caught them and lost balance.
*Thud!*
"I am so proud of you!" Anna said in a muffled voice as her face is buried on Elsa's tummy. While Elsa was blushing as she could feel Jin's hand on her waist.
However, that's not the problem here! The problem is that she could feel something hard pressing on her buttocks. This is the first time she felt this feeling and it's different than just a pebble!
"H-hold on Anna." Elsa stuttered as she looked over her side and whispered to Jin.
"Jin what is that?" Elsa asked while Jin was keeping a monotone face, trying his best to hold his face from twitching or making an expression.
"What is what?" He 'innocently' asked while pushing Elsa and Anna away from the top of him.
"It's....nothing." Seeing that she and Anna were pushed and the feeling of the hard thing on her buttocks is gone, Elsa doesn't know what to feel.
At the same time, Rapunzel, Tigress and Olaf arrived near them and helped Anna and Elsa to get up while Tigress simply went over to Jin to help him get up.
"Having fun?" Tigress asked with an unknown smile.
"Yes." Since there's no point in lying, Jin admitted with a straight face, making Tigress sigh.
"You should really stop your attractiveness. I'm afraid by the next few years, I will see hundreds of women, especially princesses, all head over heels for you. Tone it down a little, will you?" Tigress reprimanded him while Jin replied.
"How the hell am I supposed to do that? I can't just wish to have an ugly appearance and besides, who would want that? I'd rather attract countless women than chase them myself." Jin said while patting the dust on his ass.
"Quickly, I think I heard them over here somewhere!" Just as they were talking to one another, Jin and the rest suddenly heard other people's voices not far from them and seeing the incoming light from afar, all of them quickly looked at each other in a panic.
Just as everyone was panicking on where to hide and hearing the footsteps closing in, Jin decided to grab each of them and whispered.
"Quickly! All of you hold on to each other!" Jin quickly ordered them.
Although confused, they still did as told. Elsa held Anna while Anna held Rapunzel while Rapunzel held Tigress and Tigress held Jin's hand.
Seeing that they're all finally holding each other, Jin knew he can't carry this many people with his chi alone, so he would have to resort to other methods.
Black wings suddenly sprouted from his back as Jin's form changed to his devil form, shocking them all and before they could react, Jin quickly bent his knees to gather momentum before jumping as high as possible, flapping his wings very hard the moment they were in the sky!
Meanwhile, back on the ground where they used to be, tens of humans wearing peasant clothings came walking in, holding their torches.
"What happened here?" The person leading them was shocked when he saw several broken trees and burned ones.
It's like a war has just ensued here!
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