I'm still in a dilemma whether I should continue this novel, maybe I will be more motivated if this one gets a contract. I wonder if I should change it to third person narrative or first person narrative but in past tense. And less cursing to make it more suitable for a wider audience.
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As I wait for the feedback, I write a new one. It's an entry for WPC Sept 2023 themed, revenge. This time I write in third person perspective. I'm actually dumbfounded how it's much easier to write in such way than using the first person point of view. On top of that, editing is much easier if it's in past tense because I can avoid the confusion of tenses and the use of present perfect. With that being said, please check it out and let me know what you think.
I Will Kill My Followers
https://www.webnovel.com/book/i-will-kill-my-followers_27367592906540205