[A/N: I accidentally entered the contest, lol...]
The soft glow of my smartphone illuminated the darkened room, casting an otherworldly aura on the walls. With a sense of anticipation, I continued to swipe through the pages of the novel that had captured my attention. It had only been a few hours since I started reading, and yet, the story had already taken a bewildering turn.
After I finished reading through chapter 20, I shook my head as I sympathize at the protagonist.
"Oh, the main character got ntr'd?"
It hasn't been long since I've started and the dude just got ntr'd by the heroines after 20 chapters!
"This is so sad.... Anyway~"
Without wasting any more time, I scrolled down to my screen to continue reading... This is one of the worse decision I've ever made in my life!
After reaching chapter 56, I finally had a gist of the situation.
"Oh... So the first hero didn't actually had any sexual intercourse with the Saintess, plus he's a good person, except for the other two heroes who took his companions... Let's continue~"
Few more hours later.
After reading nonstop, I finally reached the climax of the novel, but....
"...What the actual fuck?"
Staring at the screen intensely, I scrolled up until the top and tried to reread the whole last chapter to see if I missed something only to end up becoming more disappointed.
"It's been only 297 chapter and the main protagonist died because of the two bastard hero that his ex-teammates chose to go with!"
I gripped on the screen and banged my head on my pillow in frustration. "No no no NO! Is this how it ends?"
Where's the revenge?
Where's the character development?
Did I miss a chapter!!?
"Fuck! I just wasted my entire allowance just to buy all the available chapters of this novel only for it to go end up fucking disappointing."
In truth, the part where the protagonist got ntr'd is fine with me since the first hero is kind to the heroine who chose to go with him, the Saintess of Light, and fully respect the protagonist even though he is weak. As for the two hero bastard, they don't deserve to even be called the hero because all they knew is to fuck with the girls and heroines who chose to go with them.
As for the problem that I have in the story is... Why isn't there any character development that should have happened to the protagonist!!? I wasted countless of hours and allowance while hoping that the wimpy protagonist will get a power up or any kind of character development. But in the end, the author ended his life after torturing him continuously as the chapter progressed.
"I read this fully hoping to enjoy a good revenge or any development in the story, but ended up becoming more disappointed. This novel is absolute trash with how they treat the wimpy protagonist. Now, I'm about to start my college life without any money inside my pocket. The author should go to jail for taking all of my remaining allowance!"
As soon as I said this, I opened up the comment section to give a review at this absolute piece of shit, that was created with only one purpose - to take money out of your pocket.
To tell you the truth, the main reason I started reading this rated 18 with an NTR genre novel wasn't just because to waste my time... One thing that got my attention was the original illustration of the protagonist and the heroines. They look absolutely stunning and beautiful! The person who draw them is probably a top artist, who just got lost in the internet and ended up in the hands of the shitty author that can't make a good story.
He probably just got clickbait!
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From: I'm_Not_Sad, I'm_Hot
★✰✰✰✰
-This novel clearly has potential because of how well the storyline was explained with a great world background. But the author didn't even give the poor MC a character development and just ruined it at the end!
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From: Hakdog3000
★★✰✰✰
-Author really knows how to ruin a good novel... Not that I read through the end, lol. Already dropped at chapter 20 after finding out that this is an ntr.
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From: Mister_Mustard
★✰✰✰✰
-NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert! NTR Alert!
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From: Professor_Professional185
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-Poor MC... No character development, no girlfriend, no money, and even lost his life at the end after getting possessed by a mere worm.
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As I was reading through the reviews, a particular review got my attention.
"How the hell did this guy managed to make a zero star review?"
After noticing the unusual zero star of the review from Professor_Professional185, I clicked on the replies.
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Cherry_Pie117
-Dude, how the hell did this guy post a zero star review! Is it a new bug?
Darkness_Soul69
-Even the demons from hell decided to send this guy to earth just to get rid of this trashy novel using his power to give a zero star review.
Bald_Junior09
-Hey! Give us a tutorial. I want to use it ruin other novels.
Holy_Gains
-Reply to "Bald_Junior09's" comment: Dude, get a life and stop ruining other work just because you don't have one.
Bald_Junior09
-Reply to "Holy_Gains's" comment: Get yourself one before you start giving someone a reply.
Holy_Gains
-Reply to "Bald_Junior09's" comment: Your phone number is 09*********, your name is Andrew, and your current location is at San Francisco.
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"....."
I definitely saw nothing....
After enough contemplation if I'm going to write a review or not, I decided to stop myself.
I'm not going to admit that I'm now scared shit about the author tracking me down like the poor guy who insulted the wrong person...
Clearing my throat, I rolled over my bed and raised my phone above my face. And just them, I could feel my eyelids beginning to feel heavy.
As I was about to close my eyes, I accidentally let my phone slip away from my hands and fell directly on my face, promoting me to close my eyes as I prepared myself for the pain.
Pak-!
Fuck, that hurt so bad... Huh?
Feeling something that was similar to a hand hitting my right cheek, I slowly opened my eyes.
My nose should be the one to feel the pain since my phone fell directly on it, but why does my cheek feel more painful?
Though my vision was blurry, I could still make up for the seven blurry figure in front of me.
There's a girl with red hair with a witch hat, a short girl with orange hair, a yellow haired girl that was slightly taller than the orange, a violenthaired girl wearing a glasses, and so on....
The heck is going on! All of their hair color is related to rainbow- there's a Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Indigo and even Violet!
What are they? Did they perhaps came mistaken my home from someone else and entered my room as a mascot...? Wait, aren't I suppose to be on my bed?
How strange... Eh, how am I standing up!!?
Obviously I know that I have a foot, but... I was just on my bed few seconds ago.
After a couple of second of contemplating in silence, my thoughts was instantly cut off after I heard the yellow-haired girl speak up.
"I'm breaking our engagement, Hero Saber!"
Saber... I think I've heard that name before...
After looking at my hands and opening up my palm, then turning my attention to look at the sword that was resting in it's scabbard hanging on my waist, that's when the realization hit me.
Saber Gladiolus, the main protagonist of the "Hero Must Fall" novel.
And the body of who I'm currently possessing.
"I'm already fucked... Wait, "cucked" should be the right word to explain my current situation."
I've been transmigrated in the body of the wimpy hero.