Pakeeza_Rani

"Now that you know " he said , as he took a slow step ahead,  his presence swallowing up the space between us,  " The real game begins"

Pakistan

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Highly recommended till now  , best for suspense lovers and little bit school touch, the story was good , character development oustanding  , but the writter seemed to change course of story but i must a admit it was best desicion 

Although it's beginning but i could see it building the tension Aroxin is going to speared fire after this new update and writers is highly recommended to keep it slow burn

WRITING QUALITY IS GOOD BUT YOU FOCUS MORE ON EMOTIONS OF CHARACTERS . NOW THE DEVELOPMENT OF STORY IS AWSOME BUT THE THING WE NEED IN MORE DETAIL IS THE WORLDS IMAGE THE WORLD YOU HAD EXPRESSED IN FIRST CHAPTER I AM JUST WAITING FOR THE MASKMAN BECAUSE WHAT A CHARACTER DESIGN IS IT JUST AMAZING .KEEP IT UP WRITING QUALITY AND WORLD BACKGROUND IS THE THING YOU SHOULD FOCUS ON BUT THERE ARE SOME LINES THAT ARE MY FAVORITE ESPACIALLY THE MASKMAN LASTEST LINES

The fortuners

Table of contents

Volume 1 :Beginning

Chapter 1 - Welcome to create on WEBNOVEL