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Chapter 11 - Chapter 11: Sheol

[Authors Note: Hello, author bro here just to give a quick heads-up that I may have let my degenerate little brain go a bit further than usual. I can't promise that you will like everything lewd I write but I can promise there will be NO NTR of any kind that will ever appear on this novel. The main character will always be priority numero uno and his harem will not degenerate into a yuri-only love fest. That is all, thanks for reading!]

"I saw the Emperor – this world-soul – riding out of the city on reconnaissance. It is indeed a wonderful sensation to see such an individual, who concentrated here at a single point, astride a horse, reaches out over the world and masters it." —Hegel

In this world, one can make a deal with the very spirit of the world. The [Weltgeist] is keenly interested in 'balance' and one way to create this balance is through contracts with humans. The first one to discover this powerful double-edged sword, is Geist King Faust. The man wished for ultimate power to protect his kingdom and the [Weltgeist] answered his prayer, the only catch being that the cost for his prayer was his soul.

To achieve power one must sacrifice something. Whether that be time, money, family, or their soul everyone must give something. The higher the value of sacrifice the more power one gains from it. That is the law of the universe.

Here are the conditions of the new power I set.

I cannot harm full-blooded humans inside the technique nor can I imprison them or transport them without their consent.

Upon activation I will lose a random memory of my past life until I reactivate the ability again in which case another memory will be lost.

This ability can only be used once a month and will drain my geist for a week leaving myself in a weakened state.

While active the technique can only last for 10 minutes and any time spent past that drains my life force by one year per minute

[Sheol] is the land of still darkness in the Hebrew Bible, and the underworld where dead souls come to reside. Every phantom Garridan Wraith killed exists here and is now a servant at my beck and call. The amount was staggering as the tranquil sea of shadow was filled with abominations that strained your sanity when you looked at them.

"Find them and bring them to me!" The shadows roiled under me as a throne made of darkness formed under me. Even at their peak, three Tier-3 phantoms would still find themselves hard-pressed to beat ten Tier-2 phantoms let alone the hundreds that dwelled here.

The sight of Shuten-dōji being grabbed kicking and screaming by the shadowy hands of my thralls put a smile on my face. Seeing the normally smug and unflappable Ibaraki-dōji terrified and pale-faced filled me with mirth. And when that bitch Kane-dōji found herself forced into a bowing position before me I couldn't contain my erection.

Charlotte walked up to my throne under her own power, a relieved smile and tears in her eyes. I grabbed hold of her and gave her a searing kiss as I set her on my lap. Her little ass began to rub on my erection only egging me on, a teasing smile on her face.

"I missed you..." She leaned up and whispered in my ear. My hands wrapped around her stomach as I pulled her close.

"Me too Shar, me too." I stroked the mark on her stomach as I spoke. The joy of knowing that it kept her safe made me want to kiss it and maybe kiss her little lips down below too.

The last guest politely escorted by the shadowy phantoms was Ueda Daichi, the guy looking a little worse for wear. His long disheveled hair and emaciated frame made me wonder how long Kane had kept him captive.

"Okay, here's the deal you three, we're going to play a little game. For one minute all three of you can attack me with everything you've got and I won't strike back. Fail to kill me in under a minute and I get to decide your fate. Sound good?" The three of them looked at each other and then at the throng of ravenous monsters just waiting for the orders to tear into them before slowly nodding.

"Good, now Charlotte you stay here while I show you how badass I've become," I spoke as I picked her up and set her on the large black throne. Strutting down the steps I decided to go full Chuuni as a black trench coat grew from my shadows. Damn, I felt badass now!

"You were already sufficiently 'badass' to me darling, but I must say seeing you so confident." She licked her lips, "makes me so wet." Her words made my walk a little awkward as I tried hiding my boner.

"I'm gonna fuck the shit out of you when we get home." It wasn't a threat but a promise, and judging by her moist eyes and crimson cheeks she couldn't wait.

"Oi, bastard don't think that just because you've got a new fancy technique that means we'll just roll over and take it!"

"Shu-chan's right Garridan-kun, we don't intend to lose."

"I'll kill you."

"Ha, it's funny you guys think your little team is hot shit when in truth you're just a sexy version of a goldfish poop gang!" My diss flew over the larger women's heads but Kane seemed particularly pissed by being called that.

Like the scene of a wild western we all paused as we got a distance away from the throne. What counted as high noon didn't matter as Shuten-dōji charged like a mad bull with her horns. I side stepped her and marveled at how light I felt in my domain. My hand instinctively grabbed a handful of the red Oni's thick ass cheek. Her response was to try and kick me in the dick which I simply dodged before grabbing her leg in the air and feeling her toned thighs.

"Stop fucking molesting me!" She yelled, her crimson cheeks painted with a purple blush.

"Then stop being so molestable!" All I got in response to my quip was a frustrated scream.

The sting of a pink whip cracking along my back brought me out of my flirty mood as I dodged out of the way of another pair of strikes. Ibaraki's clones circled around me like a wolf pack. Kane herself would occasionally poke through the encirclement to throw knives that seemed to always try castrating me.

Shuten-dōji used these distractions to great effect as her fist pummeled into the side of my head. Her strike made a cracking sound and for a second a beautiful smile blossomed on her face before the pain kicked in. A moan tore through her lips as her body shuddered. Love juice sprinkled down her spasming thighs as she looked like she pissed herself. Her eyes went glassy and a deep purple blush covered her face. Collapsing on her knees she panted in need and as to the shock of her sisters and me she said something amazing.

"I-I surrender, just please keep hurting me! I can't cum without you anymore! Even that lightning bitch couldn't get me off, I'll do anything!" She bowed in a perfect dogeza as she screamed her request, her sisters and Daichi watched on in stunned silence. Charlotte smiled with a wicked gleam in her eye at the sight.

"Okay, that's one down!" I spoke as the heel of my tennis shoe slammed into the back of the red Oni's skull. Her body spasmed again as a hoarse moan left her lips, a growing puddle of femcum forming under her sopping wet puss. Walking over to her back I used it as a stool as I sat down, a ragged breath leaving her lips was her only response.

"What are you waiting for, it's not like I'm gonna bite, yet!" My words goaded them into action as Ibaraki puffed on her pipe creating a ring around me and my stool. From this cloud dozens of clones emerged each one attempting to hit me. Being a fair sport I decided I'd let all of their strikes land. In this domain the hits felt like a tickle and I couldn't help but smile at the soothing feeling they provided.

"Die." A gleaming sword twice as large as the tiny Kane came gliding through the air like a guillotine. It's path had it slicing through all her allies clones before it met my outstretched hand. I caught the thing with the casual grace of a pro baseball player catching a pop fly. My smile widened at the girl's growing fear. I'm going to enjoy breaking her.

"Garridan, time's up!" My smile took on a sinister look as chains of shadow erupted from underneath them tying them up like little Christmas presents. Standing up I grabbed Shuten-dōji by the throat, her choking gasps were followed by a trickle of love juice that dribbled down her legs.

"So here's the thing, I can't just release you girls cause you'll go back to pulling stunts like you guys did yesterday. A young girl almost lost her only family and that makes me angry, even worse than that is the fact that she's mine. I also don't want to kill you guys as that would be a waste if I couldn't fuck your slutty bodies whenever I feel like. So what I'm going to do is rewrite a few things in your noggin, don't worry I'll be gentle." My green eyes met the terrified and horny eyes of Shuten-dōji as she tried to struggle from my grasp.

Her mind was too easy to penetrate as my geist overpowered hers and began overriding her cerebral nervous system. Painwould feel like the sweetest pleasure and any thought of betrayal would cut off her access to this pleasure. I may have also written in some degenerate fetishes for her to now have in equal measure to her masochism.

My hand around her throat channeled geist into a mark completely unlike Charlotte's. This one manifested in the form of a purple scar across her neck like she had been cut along with scars on her shoulders and the top of her hips. The others watched on in horror as I casually grabbed onto her arm and ripped it off. But instead of the graphic blood, one would expect from this her arm looked like it had already healed from the amputation. She moaned as the pain it sent through her body pushed her into another full-body orgasm. Instead of humoring her any more I snapped her arm back into place like a Bionicle and moved on to my next target.

"W-wait please don't—" Ibaraki's words were silenced as my hand wrapped around her slender neck. Her struggles grew less and less as despair took her mind over. When my geist entered in and began rewiring her brain she didn't even put up a fight. It wouldn't have done anything but still!

Her mark manifested in the form of purple nipple rings that pierced her flesh without even spilling a drop of blood. In the department of preferred fetishes since she really likes her kiseru I thought I'd give her something else to put in her mouth. Now her mouth has the sensitivity of her vagina and produces saliva in the same way a woman produces love juice. Her massive tits got similar treatment as well, her nipples now being sensitive to gentle stimulation and growing in size to allow me to stick my dick in them. When engaged in paizuri however her sensitivity goes through the roof. She's the ultimate body-modified whore!

Her onee-sama personality still remained the same but with the added benefit of me being her little brother who she gets pleasure from pampering. Any thought of betrayal would come with a deep sense of fear and unease and like a little girl she'll come and tell me about it. I lowered the dazed woman but not before pulling at one of her nipple rings. Unlike a normal nipple ring however the thing slowly pulled out to reveal a little phallic-shaped plug. Once removed the dripping breast milk of her newly formed nipple-pussies dripped down the underside of her tits. God, I love hentai!

"I'm going to fucking kill you." And last but certainly not least was a loli with sass and a pert little ass. Out of the three Dōji sisters I was going to enjoy breaking her the most.

"Daishi-chan please stop, if you glare at me like that I'm going to blush!" Her venomous rebuttal died in her throat as she realized he knew about her secret all along.

"When did you notice?"

"Well, the whole train attack had me a little paranoid so when I saw that the main character had been replaced with a cheap illusion copy I knew something was up. I just didn't know that you had the hots for my girl though!" I laughed as I grabbed her by the neck too, everyone gets equal treatment here after all.

"I'll...fuckin'...kill...you." My rewrite of her mind was the most severe as I destroyed any trace of her obsessive love for Charlotte except for times I'm down for a loli threesome (might be all the time). The next move was turning her cute little ass into the perfect receptacle for my cock. Her backdoor found itself on the receiving end of heavy modification to turn it into a sensitive mess that so much as putting just the tip in will give her an eye-crossing orgasm. Her mark appeared like a cow's brand that said 'property of GW'. I also added a little feature that'll make her super horny when spanked, I'm such a genius.

"Okay Charlotte its time to bail. These three will come crawling back soon enough!" My words filled the whole world as everything condensed before disappearing in a flash.