Hi, the author here just letting you all know am going to continue this series The Virtues of this Tropical Isle.
I really spent money on AI generated pictures but yeah they turned out like I wanted. I may use some of there designs in my new work just a bit tweaked.
I think I had an ok premise for it 7 main characters the 7 virtues. I may come back to this in a later series I might right later on. Which I mentioned earlier.
I wanted to really do a lot of things with my first work but i think I've done too much and introduced too many characters from the jump and not fleshing them out. I mean I introduced almost 7 characters in the first few chapters. Looking back and rereading it I decided to create a new story.
Please continue to read and support my new series The Rise of the Unremarkable Mage.
But i will use some of the Captain's names and appearances in this new work since I wasn't able to use them in this one.
-Kaneda and Tetsuo will be used once again in Rise of the Unremarkable mage
IF you really wanted to know how the series would pan out.
-The Virtues would be unsuccessful in their retrieval of the crystal of life
-Emilia would reveal her power
-Flashback arc Everett Father POV
Kaneda, Headcaptain Ryoichi Flashback All the captains and luitenants
Introduction to Jack Solaris a rival to Kaneda
-The Seven Virtues did cross paths when they were younger.
-Everett Marx and Emilia played near the point where the incident from 10 years ago occurred
-Kaneda was the one who saved them
-eVERETTS Dad is the one who did 90% of the job but en trusted Kaneda to finish it.
-Ryoichi blames Kaneda for Everetts father deaths
End of flashback arc
The Virtues would leave the emerald Isle to
Retrieve either the spear of death or orb of destiny
Would be split into two groups
Next arc The Diamond Island
The Main Antags would be Sloth and Lust
-Lust would get a hold of Dante Dia and control him
That's pretty much how I panned it out.
A reveal would be Alice and June are sisters same father different mother. Junes mom and Alice's Mom were okay with this but a tragic event happened that had to do with the sins where June's mom died and left. The higher-ups of the Alexandrite family disowned June and demanded she be cast away. Hence the reason The alexantire stone on Alices neck would react to June.
The Couples
Everett and Mae
Emilia and Jericho
Kaneda and Ella
June and Marx
Dilla and Chonsee
The ending would be the good guys winning but Everett ultimately doing the ultimate sacrifice being the new Almighty One after the original Almighty One just wanted the Virtues to defeat the sins so he can be freed from the burden.
Si pretty much wrote out the entire rough draft of the story and I wanted to end this in 100-150 chapters but I found it challenging to try and right about over 15 characters I had to introduce instead of focusing on the main 7.