The passage appears to be well-written overall. However, I have made a few minor corrections and adjustments for clarity:
The three cultivators looked at me with perplexed faces. It was as if it were the first time someone had the guts to stand against them, sending curses back instead of merely receiving them without muttering a word.
Their faces turned red, and their eyes bore into me like a hungry dog seeing a piece of beef. "What did you say? What did you call me?" they exclaimed.
That was the typical sentence meant to provoke me into cursing them again. Were they deaf or something? Nonetheless, I was in a zen state, preparing myself for the upcoming test, but the urge to punch them in the face persisted. I was about to act on it when Ma Chen appeared out of nowhere.
"Tian Li," he said, looking at me without even glancing at the three cultivators, "The test for the Elder position is about to begin. Are you ready?"
