Dyspromen

Turkey

very great story with great world background and very nice references I hope to see this story finished.

Of the many female character that exist!!
and yet !! he still 
choose his own mother

I dropped at chapter 7 due to the huge info dump, it was 7 whole chapters of info dump with no sign of stopping. I really tried to give this fic a chance, but I couldn't take it.

My recommendation to the author is to avoid big info dumps in the future and present this kind of thing during the story with the characters learning what's going on and about the past at relevant moments rather than hitting the readers with so much info dump before the story even begins.

recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended recommended 

it is one of the best mha fanfics here. i love the way the story is progressing and the character development is really good too. i just have one request. the story is a bit slow paced, it would be great if the pace could be made a little faster. Other than that, very well written.

I like it but it’s a bit too slow paced for my taste. Keep up the good work author!

Great story so far and everything is very detailed, keep it up author👍

So far so good. Keep it up author!                                                               
                                                             

such a really good Sorry I'm happy that you are back author

A really good start, Hope to see more of this.Keep up the good work author, there is few story with REAL writing quality /world bulding on this app and yours is one of them.

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MHA: TITAN