After reading, Takoyashi slowly set the document down, his face contemplative. The first thing he noticed was that these terms are quite unequal. One example is the proposed jurisdiction of French law over French citizens in Japan, which would essentially create pockets of French sovereignty on Japanese soil. Additionally, the proposed tariff reductions heavily favored French imports, potentially harming the domestic market.
"Your Highness," Takoyashi began, "while I appreciate the straightforwardness of this document, there are some aspects that appear unbalanced."
Francis raised an eyebrow, waiting for him to elaborate.
Takoyashi continued, "For instance, the idea of having French citizens under French jurisdiction while in Japan could be problematic. It could lead to potential conflicts of interest and undermine our domestic laws."
