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As Rai formed the Ne (rat) handseal, his shadow extended towards Gai, elongating and shifting as it moved, steadily creeping forward until it fused seamlessly with Gai's shadow.
Almost instantly, Gai experienced an overwhelming sensation of heaviness in his limbs. Rai concentrated on maintaining the jutsu as he could feel the strain on his chakra reserves, but he didn't waver.
Meanwhile, Gai found himself utterly incapacitated, with both movement and speech rendered impossible. The only action left available to him was to glance around, his eyes shifting rapidly in bewilderment.
Despite the passing seconds, Rai remained steadfast. He persistently channeled his chakra into the Shadow Paralysis Jutsu, ensuring Gai's continued immobilization.
But, despite his unyielding resolve, Rai found his chakra reserves diminishing rapidly. He could only maintain the Jutsu for approximately 18 seconds before he felt his chakra deplete. With a sharp intake of breath, he was forced to release the jutsu, his shadow retracting and retreating back to his form.
Rai staggered back, his chest heaving as he struggled to regain his breath.
Observing Rai's moment of exhaustion, Gai swiftly moved towards him, concern etched on his face. "Are you alright?" he asked, genuine worry resonating in his voice.
Rai, having caught his breath, lifted his gaze to meet Gai's. A feeble yet reassuring smile formed on his lips. "I'm fine," he assured Gai. "That was quite... intense," His breaths were still heavy, his chest rising and falling rhythmically.
Gai acknowledged Rai's efforts with an affirming nod. "You performed admirably, Rai. You managed to hold me for how long?"
"Roughly 18 seconds," he responded, his smile broadening with a newfound assuredness. "Not quite half a minute yet, but I'm inching closer each time."
Gai took a moment to ponder before inquiring further, "How have your chakra control exercises been progressing? Have you been dedicating time to practice them as well?"
"Yes, I've been working on the leaf concentration exercise, and I've made considerable progress there as well. I can maintain a total of five leaves while executing my taijutsu katas – two on the index and middle finger of each hand, and one on my forehead," Rai replied.
Gai acknowledged Rai's accomplishments with a nod and a smile. "That's impressive. Although I'm not well-versed in ninjutsu, it's evident that you have a firm grasp on your jutsu," he remarked. However, his tone shifted to a more serious note as he continued, "But what if the issue lies in your chakra control? While you've made some progress with the leaf concentration exercise, perhaps it's still insufficient."
Gai gazed at Rai earnestly and inquired, "Are you aware of the purpose behind chakra control exercises?"
Rai met Gai's gaze and responded affirmatively, "Yes, we engage in chakra control exercises to enhance our control over our chakra. This, in turn, enables us to execute our jutsu with greater efficacy and precision."
Gai attentively absorbed Rai's answer, then proceeded with a subsequent inquiry, "That's correct. Now, how does improved chakra control contribute to a more successful execution of jutsu?"
Rai pondered for a moment before responding, "When we have refined chakra control, we can utilize the optimal amount of chakra required for a specific jutsu. If we provide insufficient chakra, the jutsu won't activate. Conversely, an excess of chakra could lead to wastage or even self-inflicted harm."
Gai acknowledged Rai's response and continued, "Exactly. What if the issue at hand is rooted in your chakra control? Is it possible that you're still expending an excessive amount of chakra for your techniques?"
Rai found himself in a brief silence, contemplating Gai's proposition. Eventually, he responded, "Perhaps you have a point. While I have devoted significant time to honing my jutsu, it may be more beneficial to concentrate on the leaf manipulation exercise for refining my chakra control."
He rubbed his head thoughtfully, admitting, "It seems I've been so preoccupied with acquiring new skills that I somewhat disregarded the foundational lessons I had learned earlier. The solution was within my grasp all along, but I was too absorbed to recognize it." He then gazed at Gai with renewed determination and expressed his gratitude, "From now on, I'll pay greater attention to the fundamentals. Thank you so much Gai.
Gai grinned broadly at Rai's determination. "I'm always happy to help," he said, clapping the younger shinobi on the back. "Now that you've got your answers, How about we have a little spar?"
Rai paused for a moment, contemplating, before speaking up. "Are you sure you should be doing this? You just had a very intense match with Kakashi, and you must be exhausted," he said with a concerned look on his face.
Gai chuckled heartily and responded, "There's no need to be concerned, Rai. I'm always ready for a good spar. Besides, it'll give me a chance to see how much you've improved since our last training session."
"Alright, let's do it then," said Rai as he got up from the ground and assumed a fighting stance in front of Gai.
"Show me what you've got." gai said, a broad smile adorning his face.
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Rai launched himself towards Gai, with an explosive burst of energy, aiming to catch him off-guard with the sudden move. However, Gai had already anticipated Rai's maneuver, effortlessly sidestepping and evading his attack.
Yet, Rai was not so easily discouraged. He recalculated his strategy on the fly, weaving a deceptive feint to the left before hurtling a ferocious strike from the right. Gai, however, remained as calm as a placid lake, smoothly retreating just out of reach, leaving Rai to only find empty air where his opponent should have been.
Determined to press on, Rai attempted a rapid jab, but Gai's seamless evasion left him swinging at empty air. Seizing the momentary advantage, Gai retaliated, his leg whipping out like a snake, connecting with Rai's abdomen, causing him to recoil and gasp for precious breath.
Rai stumbled, clutching his midsection, his lungs clawing for air. He knew he had to reassess his tactics if he hoped to gain the upper hand.
With a deep, steadying breath, Rai launched himself forward once more. This time, he led with a swirling overhead kick, aiming for Gai's head. But Gai was already in motion, ducking under the high-flying attack. Rai, however, had more tricks up his sleeve. He swiftly transitioned his spinning overhead kick into a ground-skimming sweep aimed at Gai's legs
Despite Rai's swift maneuver, Gai was not caught unaware. As Rai's sweeping kick sailed below him, Gai displayed a near superhuman agility, leaping over the strike and landing lightly behind Rai. Without wasting a breath, he pivoted and launched a devastating punch, a missile aimed directly at Rai's face.
Rai's eyes widened in alarm as he saw the incoming attack. He tried to evade, jerking his head to the side, but Gai's fist was a blur of speed, too quick to be outrun. It connected with a thunderous smack, a sound that echoed around them, and Rai was thrown to the ground, the world spinning around him.
However, Rai's spirit was indomitable. Casting aside the searing pain, he surged back to his feet and hurled himself forward once more. He rushed forward, unleashing a storm of punches and kicks, a flurry of desperate attacks, but Gai's movements were like that of a skilled dancer. He gracefully stepped to the side, ducked and weaved, blocking Rai's attacks with ease.
Gai's footwork was flawless, the ground beneath him seeming to become his dance floor. His steps were quick and precise, allowing him to change direction and pivot on a dime, slipping out of Rai's reach time and again.
The fight was a grueling marathon, and Rai could feel the exhaustion gnawing at his muscles. His once swift and decisive blows were slowing, his movements becoming less precise, his body no longer obeying his mind's commands with the same fervor. He knew he was teetering on the edge of his limits.
Summoning a final surge of energy from deep within, he launched a low sweep aimed at Gai's knees. But Gai, ever vigilant, predicted the move, his body already tensing to leap over the incoming strike. However, Rai was faster. He arrested his kick midway, pivoted on his heel, and transformed the sweep into a stunning uppercut. The blow rocketed into Gai's chin with a deafening impact.
The sheer force of the strike sent Gai reeling backwards. But even in this, Gai's grace was evident as he twisted mid-air, landing deftly on his feet. A look of astonishment crossed his face as he realized Rai had managed to catch him off guard. It was a maneuver that demanded exceptional control and agility, a feat beyond the reach of most people, let alone someone so young.
However, Rai's last-ditch effort came at a cost. He stumbled backward, his legs giving way as exhaustion overcame him. He crumpled to the ground, his back hitting the earth with a resounding thump.
Gai approached Rai, who lay there gasping for air, his chest heaving like a bellows. Sweat streamed down his face, tracing the lines of exhaustion etched deep into his features.
Gai extended a hand to Rai, offering him aid to rise. Rai gratefully accepted it, though as he hoisted himself up, a piercing pain shot through his side. His face twisted in a grimace, his hand instinctively flying to his ribs. Gai observed Rai's pained expression and inquired if he was alright. Rai nodded in response, but Gai could see the lingering discomfort in his eyes.
"You fought well my young friend," Gai said with a smile. "You've made significant progress since we began our training sessions."
Rai looked up at Gai, still struggling to catch his breath. Sweat drenched his face, and his muscles throbbed from the rigorous spar. "Thank you, Gai," he managed to say between breaths.
"It's clear that you've dedicated significant effort to mastering the Water Flow Kata," Gai remarked. "It was clearly demonstrated in your movements and the execution of that final maneuver."
However, Gai's expression turned serious as he continued speaking. "Your stamina, however, leaves much to be desired. You must concentrate on building your endurance. Becoming this fatigued after a single sparring session is not ideal. Bear in mind that a shinobi requires both proficiency and stamina to prevail in combat."
Gai's expression softened slightly as he continued to speak. "I understand that you have a lot on your plate, but the path to becoming a shinobi demands both sacrifice and dedication. It is crucial to prioritize your training if you wish to excel.
You're set to enroll in the academy next year, and while the initial year may not lay significant emphasis on physical conditioning, from the second year onward, your endurance will be tested through diverse challenges. It's essential that you are ready for that."
You know, I told you on the very first day we trained together that you have potential," Gai said, his voice firm but encouraging. "But potential is merely the starting point. You mustn't squander it. Instead, dedicate yourself to rigorous training to realize your full capabilities. And that included enhancing your endurance.
Naturally, it's crucial not to overburden yourself or exceed your physical boundaries. Yet, steadily and consistently, you should push yourself to the maximum extent possible each day. This approach will foster the development of your stamina and endurance."
Gai rested a hand on Rai's shoulder. "I have confidence in you. I'm convinced you're capable of achieving this because the flames of youth burn brightly within you."
Gai's demeanor lightened after a moment, a playful grin spreading across his face. "But enough of that for now. Let's get something to eat, shall we? My treat." He clapped Rai on the back, I know a place nearby that serves the best ramen in the village. You'll love it."