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Yun mei , heiress of yun clan.Some people will think that being a heir or heiress a good thing as there will be money , women , people to do your bidding .. yep thats life right there... dream buddy, suck this lolipop ----O because once you regarded as a heiress your words , actions , works have certain expectations as well as consequences as people will judge your every move. you will say," nah , i dont care. i will do what i want". May be you can but then you won't be remain a heir for long cause some one with good reputation will take that place it usually your siblings but if you know about assassination someone else can . And in clans this thing is regular thing with addition of betrayal . And for that position your life always stays in danger ...wait wait wait i was talking about Yun mei and i did a U turn there... sorry for the guy sucking the lolipop..
Yun mei , heiress of yun clan was also a victim. When she was a kid she excelled at everything, be at study or sports she was regarded a genius. life seemed easy as loving father and mother , handsome elder brother , a clan full of people who seem good on the surface. then it happened one night a maid tried to poison her but as a heiress there was someone who will taste the food before she ate and she died a gruesome death as the poison melted her insides .. it was her 1st time seeing a dead body...a murder....a death.. and it wasn't a pretty sight to see . The culprit maid was caught , tortured for information as she was the maid of her elder brother... But after that night the look on her brother's face changed into something else.. envy, jealousy and a mixture of hatred could be seen there . other people may say what they want but she knew she was a thorn in her brother's life..her view about life changed. her family's loving words turned into criticize and clan peoples praising gaze turned into mocking smiles . she felt suffocated in her own room .only when she was cultivating she found some peace any other time she lived with anxiousness .
Then she thought of escaping everything and went to a branch family to escape the reality .. but fate can be a bi*ch some time...the secret realm the brach family was guarding faced a collapse and monsters invaded the region as she didn't want to die she thought of helping people but as she was young she couldn't fight in the front line so helped in the management of troops while she was there she heard of some plans to attack the beasts and pointed out some flaws in their plan...and thats it ,now every plan has to go through her for revising . like people say geniuses shine in tough situation. she was a born leader and she ended that invasion with least casualties and her name spread like wild fire ..... and that came with a consequence ... an assassin tried to kill her after 3 days and some how she survived as a branch elder sacrificed his life for her.. and that was it ... her patience broke.. she left her clan .. and came to the sect.. now she is here fighting to join the sect..to find some calmness in her life..
(secret realm)
Yun mei and her team currently facing against a beast , a lightning leopard which was near origin realm.. while her team was panicking she was calm... she was instructing her team while she was attacking the beast ..
"archer aim for fatal points like eye or knees " it was hard to aim as the beast was fast.
" aim for its legs " as she was trying to lure the beast to show weakness so that her team can go for the kill..
the leopard was cunning as it was not stopping it was attacking while moving..hiding behind trees to avoid archers .....after some time yun mei was getting slow, her breathing increased and she was getting pushed back by the leopard .. at this moment an arrow came her way .... which was aimed at her vital part instead of the beast... she caught the arrow while tilting her body and easily dodging the beast , tiredness from her face was gone in stead there was a smirk and she turned towards the archer and said," the moment i was waiting for " and she dashed towards the archer girl in a blinding speed while dodging the arrows ,finally she caught up to her and said ," learn to be patient and sure about target as an archer ". and she crushed her jade token with a sword slash . Now she turned towards the leopard as now its turn . and she ran towards it with a piercing sword strike. She was now matched the speed of the leopard with smooth movements while dodging its attacks .. after sometime the leopards body was filled with cuts and it was getting slow with blood loss .. at this moment the leopard suddenly charged a lightning ball and sent towards her direction.she tried to dodge it but some part of her left hand was still got hit and she was electrocuted for a second. The leopard went for the kill and jumped at her with its mouth wide open .. this time she tried to dodge but her body was numb so she tried to aim the blade at the beast mouth with her right hand as a suicidal attempt... if she was going down .. she is taking the beast with her....but as the beast was slowed by the wounds before hand it died before its mouth can reach her but its claw did reach her from her left eye to her right soulder there was a big claw mark and the blood was flowing from it.. but it didn't hinder her .. she found the core of the beast and she then turned towards her spectating team who did nothing to help her ..... she then turned her back to them and said," you can keep the cores but now i am no longer will be in a team.. i m going solo..and if anyone among you have a suicidal wish you can follow me but know that the next person won't have time to crush her jade token as i will crush her life".
with that she walked towards the inner region of the secret realm with every step taken unsteadyly but filled with confidence and determination...