"What about the strongest person in the world whose title is self-interest? To fit the trend these days."
"I will look into that. I'm not pampering you for free anyway. If you pass the contest well and get first place in the official series, you will be granted a wish. If you like this place, you can press live. whatever you want… … I'll leave it to your imagination."
God only said what he had to say and disappeared unilaterally.
It happened without any questioning.
It happened without even having time to express my gratitude for giving such a fun and mysterious opportunity to my everyday life, which was like a treadmill.
Supernatural beings really did exist!
At that time, my heart was pounding at the thought of him.
[The writer has started (serial). ]
" Competition
(work information)
Title: The strongest person in the world with only self-interest
Author: God Genre: Modern Fantasy
Description of work: Lee Hwan, the strongest player in the world that has returned. But he is no longer the man he used to be. Now all he wants is self-interest. 」
Surprised eyes widened.
I fully sympathize with the desire to show readers my writing as soon as possible.
But only one prologue. You mean starting a series with just two lines?
It is common sense among all aspirants to prepare more than 10 episodes in stockpile, and to say hello with at least 5 updates on the day of the start of the series.
Especially if you are an aspiring person starting from a free serial column like a contest.
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That's why it's just buried in other serials! How fierce is the competition?
A new message came to my mind as if my thoughts were not reaching me.
[The writer started (monitoring).
"When are you going to comment?" ]
It was good to see him refreshed on his cell phone or computer.
In any case, I had been haunted by a strange sense of incongruity ever since the gods visited, and the surroundings could not be so quiet.
As expected, the world outside the window had changed wonderfully.
Leaves fall from the trees and remain suspended in the air.
Pedestrians stop as they walk. That's how time in this world has stopped.
It just went well.
Because there were so many things I wanted to say.
"Pile up about 10 episodes as a stockpile and start. The title and subject matter look good, so it should be enough to attract attention. Don't be in too much of a hurry."
[The writer is having fun.
"Oops. Views go up! They are reading my post!" ]
… … Am I completely ignored?
[The writer is anxious.
"Someone else uploaded it. madam. I was on top." ]
[The writer started (work).
"I need to write more and upload them soon." ]
The feeling of something sucking me intensified.
Shoot!-
No, I'm going to start with the stockpile… … .
* * *
the first place. I was covered with a blanket on the bed.
As the previous message said, God is starting to work.
Writers with good writing skills often feel that the characters in the work are alive as the writing progresses.
I too have had that experience sometimes.
So, if you lay the background, the characters in the work will move on their own and get the experience of creating a story according to their accumulated personality and behavior.
As if God didn't have to wait for such an experience, he brought a living person into the world of my art.
He observes me and sets the stage.
That's how supernatural beings write web novels.
It is an amazing way of writing.
A new paragraph has just been created.
[ One.
What was he thinking, Lee Hwan was lost in thought.
His hand, sticking out of the blanket, had become too weak to be the fist of the Absolute, who had scolded the whole world.
Hands before learning martial arts.
It was the old hand that had nothing. ]
Wait!
You start the important episode like this?
At best, they made a slick and spunky prologue, but it's going on again in a clichéd way.
God is writing the old way.
It is a method that only worked in the days of paper books, which were called fantasy novels, not web novels.
It might have worked then, but not now.
How many talented writers there are!
It is not enough to emphasize several times, and it is not an exaggeration to say that the success of the article depends on the first three episodes.
Even more so, in God's writings, I don't feel the freshness seen in aspirants. Even if it's just one paragraph, you can tell.
He doesn't seem to be the type to write something armed with wit and humor.
That's the realm of talent.
Even a supernatural being capable of creating such a world seems to have something unavoidable.
… … Somehow, the reason I feel like I'm going to cry is probably because it's not like other people's work.
I know that heart well.
Why don't you want to keep up with the trend? A novel that reads alcohol with a lightness that bounces.
However, there is a difference between lightness and childishness, so if you follow it clumsily, you will end up dead.
That's why I wonder if this side with a stiff style is better.
Because there is a lot of room to reinforce the story.
You can be confident that I can help you with that part.
First of all, you have to hurry up and go the right way.
As the main character, I returned to the past before learning martial arts. Other than that, I don't know anything.
It's very vague, but there is no reader who doesn't like the main character becoming stronger.
In a situation where you don't even know what kind of worldview and story the writer has prepared, isn't this enough?
Rather than spending a lot of time recovering the power of the past, it will appeal to readers to drive away from the beginning.
In the beginning, the story of recovering the power of the past should be developed quickly.
So, if it's a line or a thought that needs to be written at this timing… … .
[ 'First of all, I must find the strength of my body.'
Lee Hwan thought.
But then there was a knock on the door.
As if it were not just a visitor, a terrifying sound began to thump. ]
thump thump!
The sound of knocking on the door with such force that it actually resonated.
[Lee Hwan frowned and turned his head toward the door.
"I know what's inside. open quickly! Before I destroy it!" ]
"I know what's inside. open quickly! Before I destroy it!"
The young man's voice that followed was full of anger.
[ Kwon Sang-hoo (character)
There will be friction with Lee Hwan, who has returned.
＜Extra＞ ＜Violence＞ ]
ah. I was trying to stop this!
* * *
[The writer is struggling.
"I made a case once, but what do I do now… … ." ]
Looking at the message window, it seemed that God had nothing planned.
Otherwise, there is no way to proceed in this way.
It does not show what kind of past Lee Hwan went through and how he returned, nor does it show what differentiates him from other works.
It doesn't matter.
The writing style is different for each writer.
Just as there are writers who start with a detailed worldview and plot, there are also writers who excavate good titles and materials and improvise stories.
And in the case of the latter, I often feel more fun from the point of view of writing.
The man who called himself God, the writer of this article seems to be that type.
The problem is that this is the beginning of episode 1… … .
You need to hold on to the readers who came in after seeing the short prologue and continue to create anticipation.
At this time when every sentence and every line is precious, wasting pages is what the god who wants to be called a writer is doing!
[The writer is struggling.
"What am I supposed to do with these extras for fun?" ]
no. That's not it. So why did you send that guy?
Right now, it's not important what to do with that guy, but how the main character, Lee Hwan, becomes stronger quickly.
I need to know something to deal with that guy. When do I do my past settings? Are you sure you don't?
I held out without opening the door.
The more you do, the more you break the door, the pounding and the guy's voice grow louder and louder.
"hey!"
Finally, I heard the sound of pressing the number key several times, and then the sound of the door unlocking.
"If you're going to change it, change it properly. with a baby Everything you do is like that."
This guy who appeared was really a living person.
He is tall and has a stern face. It seemed as if he would hit me at any moment as he strode forward with twin wicks in his eyes.
I completely closed my eyes.
It was because it was difficult to suppress the fluttering of the heart in a situation where a fight was likely to break out at any moment, seeing a real live person in front of him.
In any case, the next line is important to reverse this futile event.
Come to your senses.
It was said to be the fist of the Absolute who scolded the whole world… … .
You must have had many experiences before returning.
Even though he returned with a weak body that had not learned martial arts, wouldn't he be able to defeat at least one ordinary person with past experience?
The story should be led by the main character!
That is, if the story is to be started, it must not be by some extra.
If you start the first episode like that, the interest in the prologue will disappear right away, and even I will get off at that part.
The writer doesn't seem to have any intention of pointing out past settings in my head… … .
I have to carry on somehow.
I spit out the words I managed to recall.
"Good."
Regressor Lee Hwan.
His new resolution is self-interest,
It came out of unfulfilled revenge.
Before returning, I lived with one righteous belief, but rather missed many opportunities and was betrayed because of that great belief.
In the end, he died without even achieving revenge.
Don't waste your time on such a false ideal, if only I'd kept mine!
At least he could have gotten revenge.
… … Given this situation, it is obvious that Lee Hwan must have felt that way.
It must have been regret for the stupid past life.
There will also be a lot of anger.
However, he was a person who had risen to the ranks of the absolute. Because I regressed, my mind is the same as it was then.
You will know how to control yourself, and you will have the skill to take advantage of the situation you are in. Like most people who have risen to the pinnacle of a field.
I hid my agitation and spoke my last words calmly.
I am Lee Hwan. Lee Hwan.
"You came just in time."
As soon as I realized that I was an important protagonist on this stage, I felt that my heart, which had been beating fast, calmed down little by little.
I was actually surprised at how effective it was.
Maybe the writer is helping me to be faithful to the role of Lee Hwan.
"Did you eat something wrong? Are you hitting a goal today?"
Anyway, it's time to have a good cause to knock this guy down.
Let's get the settings.
Let's create a character background.
Lee Hwan at this time is a victim of constant violence since school days, and has not escaped from it even as an adult.
The perpetrator at the time was this extra, Kwon Sang-hoo.
Then it's no problem if you eat one.
muttered inwardly.
[The old past flashed through Lee Hwan's mind.
'When I think of these days, I feel so pathetic that I want to die. because of this kid I was just paying off a bastard's debt.' ]
[The writer is interested.
"Is our Lee Hwan paying off Kwon Sang-hoo's debt?"]
[The writer has reinforced (person * Kwon Sang-hoo). ]
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[Reason for reinforcement: "I was just paying off this bastard's debt." ]
[Reinforced contents: At this time, the age that Lee Hwan was afraid of. After extorting more money from the returning Lee Hwan, he becomes a mannequin to check Lee Hwan's condition. ]
oh! The writer was responding right away.
He sighed and spat it out of his mouth.
"Anyway, I just wanted to try this body out."
[ The writer is struggling with (name of martial arts). ]
Yes, that's how it goes!
[ ① Heavenly Demon Art
② Blood Magic Art
③ Sura Blood Magic Ball
④ Storm light magic ]
no. no!
How many good-looking names… … .
With such a cool name, it doesn't contain any boring heavenly demons or bloody demons, but just hearing it gives off the feeling that it's going to be really strong… … .
[The writer has decided Lee Hwan's martial arts as Cheonma Shin Gong (天魔神功). ]
ah! Author! It's not the Heavenly Demon God.
The Heavenly Horse of today is not the Heavenly Horse of the past. It means that he has become a jap-kae who does everything from cooks to idols.
Please avoid the Heavenly Demon!
But there was no way to stop it, and things were going too fast.
[ Cheonma Singong (Martial arts)
Invented by the Cheonmazon, super-fine martial arts ranging from simbeop, swordsmanship, kwonbeop, jangbeop, footbeop, etc.
It is said that one of them alone is unparalleled martial arts, but when you master all of them, you reach a single extreme that unites all of them.
Of these, Lee Hwan trained mainly in the Cheonma Kwonbeop.
Cheonma Fist: Consists of a total of 7 herbivores. herbivorous name undecided]
[ The writer is thinking.
"Is it too much?" ]
is it so. That's right.
[ The writer is thinking.
"no. If you put a lot in it, there will be a place to use it all later." ]
Then, the novel paragraph was completed.
[ "Even if it wasn't so, I just wanted to test this body."
Lee Hwan said in a dry voice.
Kwonbeop among the Heavenly Demons.
The subtle and powerful description of the Heavenly Demon Fist passed through his mind at the same time. ]
uh?
At that moment, I was sucked into a phenomenon I had never felt before in my life.
The silence itself is the opposite of the feeling that the whole world is turned upside down that I felt when I first came to this world.
It seemed as if pitch-black darkness had fallen all at once.
The body that contained my spirit disappeared, and I was filled with the fullness of everything I was melted into this dark and quiet world.
Soon, when a shimmering bright light appeared into this world.
I thought it was the same as the human figure.
A glowing human figure with a face, arms and legs began to move.
At the end of the motion of leaning in and extending a fist, flash!
At the end of the motion of raising the turning radius and retracting the fist, another flash!
The condensed power flashed again from the obvious explosion!
It seemed to swell into dozens of fists at once, and it flashed without fail in one motion!
Flash! Flash! Flash!
Every time the light flashes.
So all kinds of information started to imprint on me.