POV Elizabeth Silvermoon:
"Ow, hey, don't bite me so hard, Eli!" my father's infidel exclaimed as he tried to remove the mark.
(Whoever he was, he didn't leave the mark hidden...).
When a female dragon wants to make it clear that something belongs to her, she leaves a kind of mark on the object or individual.
Some try to make it discreet, as in the case of incredible treasures or "living toys". That way, you can know almost exactly where it is, as that mark leaves traces of the aura that was used to create it every so often.
From my recollection, it is preferable to hide this mark, since other dragons might take it as a challenge or just want to interfere for fun.
The fact that she left that mark on my father's shoulder, a relatively easy place to access, makes it clear that she trusts her own strength.
(She didn't do anything either...)
I glanced slightly at my mother, who didn't even notice that my father, "her husband", has been marked by another female dragon, and possibly stronger than her.
(My father either did not resist or simply could not resist...).
That a male dragon has been marked is simply humiliating, as it means you belong to someone and....
Is there such a thing as a dragon without pride?
No.
We are extremely proud creatures, especially our glorious lineage of absolute dragons, who would rather die than be branded with that shame,.
(Being only 3 of us, maybe... dad made a sacrifice).
If you think about it another way, my dad let himself be marked by that unknown dragon as a condition that he would not harm us. That way, the pure lineage of our clan would survive, even if it was with my existence.
(Dragons don't like adopted children...).
Just the thought of the hypothetical case that I would have to endure creatures not bearing my blood near me disgusted me.
Every thought I had pushed me further towards the possibility of what dad humbled himself to protect us, something I don't like at all.
But I was too young to try anything and.... my mother is weak, so weak that she didn't notice the mark, so her power is unreliable?
(I need to do something... Maybe some minions?)
Then I thought of an alternative way to gain power and relevance: people.
(But I don't want just anyone)
At that moment, when I wasn't willing to accept just any inferior being, I remembered some biology lessons Alyssa gave me, specifically about genetics....
What if...?
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Pov Illios:
After Elizabeth left after biting my shoulder a little hard, I met with the guests.
[ Analyzing...].
[ Status window - Native of the Immortal World ]
[ Name: Yukari Mei ]
[ Age: 1000 years old ]
[ Crop: Sovereign of Existence – beginning, (Crop without any alteration due to disease) ]
[ Aptitude: Yin, Ice ]- (Exclusive line for natives).
[ Body: Absolute Yin Body (not pure)]
[ Bloodline: ice phoenix (commoner) - silver fox (inferior)]
[ Constitution: N/A ]
[ Talent: Innocent Cunning ]
[ Fate: Without the interference of the outsiders, she was destined to die in 3 years due to a disease called "Immortal Spirit Regression" and the side effects of her body.]
(An...elderly loli?...you really excelled yourself this time, dear sister.)
It was a very sincere thought on my part as I looked at the status window of our only visitor from the Ice Phoenix sect.
(I already thought it odd that, with her incredible jargon, she hadn't brought more female disciples).
She had told me that she would probably convince about 2 or 3 female disciples to come with her, but apparently she preferred quality to quantity.
"Gre-gre-greetings, Prince Illios," she greeted nervously.
(Her performance is impressive...)
I took a quick glance at Elena, who nodded, and for a moment I could notice a slight twinkle in her eye.
(I see).
"Don't be nervous, my fair lady. I guess you're the 'young' one, aren't you?", I said, using a confident tone, as if I was dealing with a naive young lady.
"Ye-yes, my name is Yukari Mei. It's an honor to have the opportunity to share with your highness," Yukari replied without delay.
(I think I'll have a lot of fun playing with you, Yukari).
"Not at all, the honor is mine," I replied and put my arm around her shoulders.
"I hope you don't mind that Eli's mother didn't come. Unfortunately, she is feeling indisposed," I continued as I tightened my grip slightly.
"No, I don't mind at all," was her reply. Her acting was the real deal, he would surely win an Oscar if he were on earth.
I nodded and then turned my attention to the last visitor,
"May I know your beautiful name, fair lady?", I asked the heroic looking woman who accompanied Elena.
"My name is Kira, your highness," this time the woman replied in a very respectful manner.
(She must have experience dealing with nobles, but... your face is a little red, ha ha).
[ Analyzing...]
[ Status Window - Native of the Immortal World ]
[ Name: Kira ]
[ Age: 30 years old ]
[ Cultivation: Lord of Dao-medium ]
[ Aptitude: Wood, Earth ]- (Exclusive line for natives).
[ Body: Earth Elemental Body ]
[ Bloodline: N/A ]
[ Constitution: N/A ]
[ Talent: Brave Warrior. ]
(Not bulky at all...but who cares?).
I won't discriminate against anyone, I have enough resources to make her a superpower, so all I care about is her looks, and she's very beautiful.
She had emerald green eyes that sparkled with intelligence and mischief, and curly black hair that framed her face. Her skin was tan and smooth, and her mouth was red and sensual. She wore a simple leather suit, but it matched her slender, toned figure. She stood tall and firm, as if she were an invincible warrior.
That's enough to be accepted by me.
"Please come in, let's get to know each other better," I said while still holding Yukari's shoulder.
Thus, with my arm still on Yukari's shoulders, I set out to lead them throughout the mansion.
This time, I made up a convenient story for those artifacts like the tower or the heroes' dungeon, this so as not to repeat the fiasco I made with Meilin.
It was easy, I simply told them that some very powerful master gave Elena and me these ancient artifacts because he saw us with a lot of potential.
Kira nodded, and from her I could hear some murmurs like "Unbelievable" or "The cute ones are lucky", on the other hand, Yukari hesitated for a moment before accepting this "reality".
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Pov Elena:
"Thank you so much for your support, Princess Elena," that's what a cute and tearful Lila said to me.
(I thought you were a cat burglar, but you turned out to be quite nice).
After our new visitors settled in, I took the liberty of meeting this "first wife" that my dear brother got.
At first, I thought she was a bit of a... different person, but after getting to know her, I realized she was a nice woman.
(Of course, that's just the first impression).
At the end of the day, you don't know what's in each other's hearts, but my impression of her is positive.
"Don't worry, didn't I tell you to call me sister?", I jokingly replied.
"Yes, sister," her response was very nervous.
After she told me about her life, I could sympathize with her behavior. I mean, going from being a vagabond to being the wife of a prince of the Silvermoon Empire. Besides, the way I look doesn't help much to sympathize.
Being too beautiful makes it hard for people to approach you.
(I think I'm becoming very narcissistic lately).
"Well, I think I'll call it a night," I said and prepared to leave Lila's room.
"Thank you so much for your hospitality, prin...sister," she said before I left.
I just nodded and headed for my room.
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When I arrived, I saw the ever-reliable Alyssa waiting quietly at the side of my bed.
"Well, tell me what you think," I ordered her.
Earlier, I asked Alyssa to talk to Mery and tell her about the changes Illios made and other news regarding the county.
"Yes, my lady. This is what Mery told me..." and so she began to relate to me what happened in my absence.
"A dragon princess, eh?" these words came out unconsciously after listening.
Dragons are hard to deal with, one only needs to look at the rebellious behavior of my "adorable" daughter, who only listens to me when it suits her or when Illios orders her to.
But the problem is that this dragon is interested in Illios.
(Maybe I should teach Lila how to conspire).
As the main wife, it will be Lila who will have a hard time with it, so teaching her a few tricks wouldn't hurt.
"Nothing else?", I asked if there was anything else Alyssa hadn't told me, as I could see her wanting to share something.
"... My lady it's just speculation on my part," she replied dubiously.
"Say it," I urged her to speak.
"It seems that Master Illios is encouraging the creation of factions in his harem," was a rather curious response this android gave.
"Tell me."
"Yes, you see, my lady. Master Illios is in the process of implementing a project called 'Immortal Maid', which is under the supervision of Mery, who is supporting Miss Lila." Was her answer.
"..."
"I think this project is a way to get reliable people for Lila to establish a power and not be helpless before the visitors and before you, Mistress." That was Alyssa's analysis.
Interesting... it's not a stretch to say that Illios will, at some point, become an emperor, so the factions thing doesn't sound too unrealistic. In fact, I think it's something that's bound to happen, but for factions to start forming so soon doesn't sound very believable.
"Why do you suppose that?", I asked.
"Master, the female Yukari Mei is not eligible for the rank of wife, so she will inevitably become a concubine. By bringing her in, she will automatically become part of your faction, of course, if she wants to get into this faction thing."
"And likewise, the dragon woman who came here becomes part of a royal family, resulting in her already having people, leaving only Lila, 'the main wife,' without allies," he finished.
(A good analysis)
"So, in your words, Illios created a faction for Lila to prevent that dragon and me from bullying her," I replied.
"Yes."
"..."
(If that's true, Illios' vision improved in my absence...).
Still... I think it sounds like fun to be the head of this imperial drama, since if my dear Illios becomes an emperor, then....
I will be his empress.
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Hello! It's been a while, yes, I haven't abandoned this novel and, instead, I've been feeding my wisdom thinking about how to fix it.
After receiving a lot of feedback from my acquaintances and readers, I came to the conclusion that this novel needs some urgent changes. Here are the changes I'm going to make:
1. The first chapters: Yes, I know, they are horrible, and that's why I'm going to rewrite and complement them. Also, I will write a small arc to explain why Elena and Illios were raised in a duchy.
2. Elena and Illios: Many people thought that Illios is very stupid and Elena is unbearable, and although I didn't expect so much hate, I recognize that my way of presenting both characters was very bad. So I will change their personalities a little bit.
3. The first system event: The immortal world plot has taken a lot more chapters than I supposed, so I'm going to change the convention and the first system event, letting the latter happen 2 years later (the next chapter will have this time jump).
4. Nerf to universal points: As you may have noticed, Illios has very easy ways to fix problems by simply buying from the system store. So I'm going to set some restrictions, especially when setting up "the new universe", which will be presented in the first system event.
These are the changes I have proposed to make.
I thank all of you who are still following this novel and those who are hopeful that it will improve.
I think "Supreme Universal System" is too ambitious for the "me" who started writing it and even for my current "me". So, I've been reading a lot of other novels to guide me and present you with something decent.
But like everyone else, I'm only human, so I'd like your feedback: what change would you like to see, what's left over, what interests you, and so on.
Thanks again for being part of this adventure, see you in the next chapter!