Hydra_Gairum

THOU SHALL AWAKEN THEE WRATH OF HUMANS;

THOU SHALL SEEK VENGENCE; SHOULD YOU FORGET THY'S WORK: THEN THE DEMONS SHALL RISE.......

BLOOD SHALL SHED....

LIVES SHALL SUFFER...

TRUTH SHALL SUPPRESS....

SINS SHALL BE FORGIVEN........

NEVER SHALL THY FORGET: FOR YOU SHALL FACE THE DEMISE OR SHALL FACE THE REBIRTH OF THE WORLD........

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Follow the life of our protagonist in a world filled with chaos and amidst all that he must fulfill a task given to him.

In an unknown place, without memories and no one to support him....
How shall he survive and how can he gain the trust of the people who sees him as a sinner.

Get your popcorn; pack your bags, get some drinks:
Because we are in for one hell of a ride.......


Hi guys,
This is my second novel, be sure to check out my first one 'THE REMINISCENCE OF LIFE'.
I'm open for recommendations and tips.
Thank you.

Novel for WSA 23

India

This rating might change if I see some improvement. It needs heavy editing  and I can't really grab a story from just two chapters, so...

A lot of wrong tense usage, misspellings and many other things. But the thing that irked me the most was the way the sentences are written. 

There are enough descriptions, but these descriptions just feel too hollow, like a bag filled with air. There are so many things wrong, but since this is a new book,it is still open to change and improvement.

Don't slack 👍

I must say that the writing flowed so naturally throughout the entire book. The author has a gift for weaving together beautiful lines with captivating storytelling in a way that feels effortless. Would highly recommend! 

I'm intrigued. I will be waiting for more. 😍

Very very interesting story so far, but I can't give it a higher rating due to the poor writing quality. It isn't bad to the point of taking away the enjoyment, but there are so many misplaced commas, missing punctuations, and even misplaced semi-colons?

Ignoring that, the sentences themselves flow quite well, so big kudos for that!

I'd highly recommend the author to get Grammarly (which is free) or another grammar-aiding software.

Good luck with the WSA!


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