some_writer

A young man is given a second chance at life. He gets transmigrated into Bleach as Kurosaki Ichigo and was also given a normal system. 
Follow him in his journey as he gets girls and destroys his enemies. There are some techniques from other animes so there will be some references. There's also +18 scenes so you're already warned.

Couldn't get past chapter 4. The conversations and pure cringe exuded from the main character is too much. Maybe it gets better but I feel like I got fooled by the good reviews.  

Mc just keep gaining power left and right and keep chasing skirts but nothing he does changes the plot, nearly everything happens like how it happened in anime plot wise. If author really wanted to follow plot then it would have been better to not make him op at start. For example after all the training he still lets rukia gets taken, I mean he even trained fullbringer powers to his final form and the whole fight was taunting the caption and asking them to remove their limiter but once they did he got his A** handed to him and he didn't even use his full power.

I love this Story and I love this Ichigo.He is someone who OG Ichigo should be.

it started out OK and hasn't improved. and it is do to the Mc being a loser. I'm not saying he is weak but he let's people beat him up for some reason. his character is also all over the place. which makes him not fully likable.
the story could be more story like but it spends to much on Mc being random or holding back for the lols

The story went the derp route at chapter 16. It was already very much wish fulfillment with not many coherent actions and reactions from the characters, but it was entertaining enough.

I recommend reading until chapter 16, if you can go past that chapter, it may be a fic for you!

I forced myself to try and read some more, but it's so much nonsense that I'd rather get out. 

Nothing against the author. I wish him and the story all the best.

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i try to read more if it bet better but i just can't read it anymore it is too cringe

Didnt like the harem, but kept reading because I liked this ichigo, and the statement about ichibe making him the new soul king, but you decided to gebderbend aizen, it just became a pokemon harem at this point, seriously stop.

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Hello Some_Writer i noticed you deleting 
all of your old and New storys, do this means 
you are quiting writing for good, or that you will start writing again in the future?

I wanted to reread this fanfic because to was so good but I come to this what the hell happened

what happened? all story gone [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]

HAREM..................................................................................................................................................

Honestly the pacing feels very weird and at times feels too fast the writing style feels clunky at times and some of the fights feel short-lived and unimpactful. I would like to see more World building and more in-depth conversation.

One bleach fanfiction that has better execution (IMO) is:
Degeneracy in Bleach World by Slander_ 
It's another bleach fanfiction but the World building is slower and the pacing feels more natural. 


Bleach: Another Story