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Akira Saito a boy trying to get into a high school gets into one, but there's a catch his DNA must be fused with animal DNA.

amazing i love how he describes the woman, masterpiece in world building as well, and i think there author is a respectable young fellow who is very cute

Good and bad things. It’s so hard to read, it doesn’t flow well, sentencing that doesn’t add up like instead of saying like oh she knows it’s a crime by public death. And than akira is like why you pleading cause he doesn’t know it’s a crime by public death say like “she got on the ground and started pleading “”why are you crying and begging”” because hitting a demon lord is punishable by death” it’s more easy to read like that instead of dragging it out more than it needs to be and try to describe akira the main character! A bit better instead of just 1 sentence but a girl being a paragraph gaha :)

i’m so sorry to bother with this you but still haven’t had enough to do you think so lol so i and i je suis en route je suis en vacances je suis à la recherche d’un appartement je suis en train d’essayer je 

an absolutely amazing experience, you should include some sexual scenes to break it up however

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