rewrite
I fucked up the last 2-3 chaps, and got sidetracked from what ther storyline was meant to be.
Reposting this story, after being edited and drafted into longer chapters, in maximum a week or two.
-less grammatical mistakes,
-detailed background, so as to not feel that the MC is doing things and they are happening but in a third person outlook of the story.
-More complex words to make it sound cooler.
-Thats it.