So here's the deal I'm not sure if I change chapters 1 and 2 if anyone will get notified, so I'm posting this up as temporary chapter 3.
I'm going to massively change the setting from a normal fantasy to a more of a mix of modern, post-apocalyptic, and fantasy. Honestly, I felt that plain video game like fantasy was too cliché.
So I'm reworking it where levels aren't as prevalent and the skills work less like occupation and more like usable skills.
I had originally intended for the Mc to meet women in 3 ways through the Lotto, in-person, and Dungeon-lord(bosses).
However, I realized that was going to get convoluted real quick, at least with the draws.
So, I'm going to remove the draw for Wiafu's. I might make them the drop for cheat-like skills instead.
As for Maria, I'll keep her in, but I'll change her back story a bit. I think it'll be much better and more organic than a pity draw.
As for the Mc, his family is going to be flushed out more, but the overall setting is the same. He will still end up in the dungeon.
As for r18 stuff, I feel I wasn't descriptive enough, but at the same time, I'm more focused on the actual story. I want it to feel like a nice dessert, but the main meal is the story. So I'm conflicted on where to draw the line there.
I know this is kinda messed up to change the story midway through. However, I figured if I didn't do it now when I've only just started it'd be much worse. I'm grateful that people have read my work. I hope you can put up with a little reworking.