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The primordial of sloth

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There was once a demon named Vance Lancehart this demon was unlike others it didn’t have a sin it belonged to. Each of these demons had a primordial sin they were chosen by either it be lust,wrath,pride,envy,gluttony or greed each sin with their own set of unique rules to live by. But Vance didn’t belong to any of those so he was thought to be forsaken by the sins. So he was tossed out banished from the kingdom of demons known as Terra Peccatorum.But other races hated demons to the bone so he couldn’t find asylum with them. Vance was aimlessly walking down the path but thought of something and began to make an idol and pray to it little did he know this action would change his life forever. (This is my first time writing a novel so helpful criticism would be amazing.I am also just creating this for fun so don’t expect a daily release schedule or something.I don’t own the pictures used in this novel if you own them and at any time want them removed just comment.)
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Chapter 1 - The beginning

Void was all that used to exist at first, the void was like a child in its beginning years it was prideful of how it was the first to exist.The resulting energy of that part of its life later turned into the primordial sin of pride.

Then came the realization that it would not only be the first being to exist but the only being to ever exist it became angry at this fact.The universe was created from this wrath of the void angry of its fate to be forever be alone.

The resulting chaos from the wrathful fit later resulted in the primordial sin of wrath.Next the void went into denial about its fate when suddenly it came up with an idea 'If life won't come naturally then I will make it happen' it thought.

Thus the primordial sin of greed came about as the greed for companionship was greed nonetheless.It began thinking of how to do this then looked towards the universe that it created that used to be one but was now ten.

It smiled malevolently when an idea came to mind it immediately began forcing the new universes that were created into its equivalent of a mouth.It had the idea that since these universes were made with its power that they contained power he could obtain.

And it turned out to be true and since it infinitely duplicated, then it would slowly gain enough power to create time the biggest ingredient to make life.This action was what formed the primordial sin of gluttony.

While this plan worked and time was created it realized a great flaw in its plan it was to powerful to go to the dimension he created to hold time.Thus it couldn't even visit any life that were to be created but he was fine with this even if it was just watching it would be enough to fill the hole loneliness has made in its heart was what it thought.

After this, a long time passed and life was created the joy that filled it was enough to fill the cosmos more than thousand fold.Alas that joy was not fated to last as it slowly grew angry that it could not have what the beings HE created had even when they were abysmally weaker then him.

The energy released from his energy became the primordial sin of envy.He hated that they could cry to others when they were sad, take out their anger out on people when angry,be able to show things they made to others to inflate their pride,obsess over things like gold, eat with others,or even their reproduction process they had he envied it all.

The primordial sin of lust was created from this burst of energy.Finally after all tears he could make were shed all the anger deflated he had one final idea, he once saw the creatures he made do something called sleep he remembered that when a creature was asleep it felt nothing no pain no anger no loneliness.

So he decided to not feel anything by going to sleep forever thus creating the primordial sin of sloth.

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"Grandpa I've never heard of the sin of sloth before isn't there only six sins?" said a boy with pitch black hair and horns adorning his head with listlessness in his tone."sigh Your amethyst eyes and way of speaking are just like your mothers you know that" said a man with silver hair and very long horns his skin was wrinkled showing his age.

"You never talk about my mother grandpa" said the boy instantly forgetting what he said before with slight curiosity in his voice." Get ready to go the selection is going to start soon." said the old man with some seriousness in his tone.

"I can't wait grandpa I'll be the strongest demon ever and make you proud!" The boy said a little louder then the way he talked before while walking on a street full of demons in all sorts of colors and shapes."No matter which sin you are chosen by know you will never disappoint me child." The old man said with sadness in his voice while finally arriving at a giant church that looked extremely demonic.

"Why do you sou-" the boy was cut off by a man shouting out "All who are going to be chosen line up here." "Go child line up I will be at home waiting for you." The old man said than started walking back the way he came.

(Child's POV)

'Why did grandpa walk away so fast?Whatever I hope get chosen by wrath it's the strongest sin after all.' The boy thought with nothing showing on his face.When he lined up he started hearing other children about the same age as him 7-8 years old talking he listened carefully."which sin do you want Sar?" said boy one "obviously wrath it's the strongest isn't it?" Responded boy two "Are you an idiot Sar? It may be the physically strongest but it doesn't make it the most powerful" said boy one.

"For example in a equal fight a wrath believer would lose to a pride believer because they use long ranged magic spells while wrath is a close range fighter only." Said boy one " In the same way lust believers would lose to wrath believers because wrath believers are immune to mind spells while lust is practically useless without their mind spells." Finished boy one with some anticipation in his voice.

"Which sin do you want to be chosen by Xarch?" Said boy two now known as Sar "Obviously lust if you grow strong enough you can have all the girls you want hehehe" Xarch said with a face that said obviously.

"Your gross Xarch you want to be chosen for such a stupid reason everyone knows lust is the most useless sin." Said Sar with smugness in his voice "What did you say bastard!" Screamed Xarch while jumping onto Sar attacking him.

'I wonder why demons fight so much grandpa said it's because demons were made that way, but I don't know if that's true I've seen some demons talking very nicely before.' The boy thought before a voice announced his name "Vance Lancehart come up to the pedestal."