I think I went overboard with my story and rushed into adding elements that I had too little research on in making this book. And third person perspective in writing is just not working for me.
So I'm going to be doing a rewrite! Don't worry, I have the complete story line fleshed out! It's just that I found that I was introducing to much in too little time so I wanted to write it over from the beginning. Instead of taking place at the age of 18 for the protagonist, I'm going to rewind and bring him back to the age of five.
Much better age for me to flesh out the power system and introduce you to put handsome little protagonist from young age and foster some empathy with him.
See you soon!
P.s.
10 chapters this week Guaranteed. I'm going all out to catch up on the number count!