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This is the ultimate story of a female lead with a different route to the others with a starting point.

Usually many will skip the process of the unfortunate incident that befell the MC and only write down the part where the MC is dying before entering the new character's body.

It's like a two edged sword. It could be a success or it could be a complete failure. It depends on how the writer proceeds with the story and whether the readers will be interested in it.

In addition, the structure and writing of each chapter is neat and well organized. I'm sure the reader will be comfortable while reading.

Second review, I am Chapter ten and since I last left offt chapter six alot has happened, it’s definitely worth the read, I followed each paragraph not for the commenting but because I love this authors writing style, she is creative and descriptive, @Author your a born story teller with a unique talent that’ rare amongst other authors your strategically used the below skills to acquire a story which would manifest this novel to a momentum of success, proper marketing and you as good as any other who sold out millions of copies.

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This is my second Review! (Spoiler free)

As someone who has just finished reading Chapter Ten, I can confidently say that a lot has happened since the beginning. This book is truly worth the read! I found myself captivated by the author's writing style and couldn't help but follow each paragraph with eager anticipation. The author's creativity and descriptive talent truly shine through in this work. It's rare to come across a born storyteller with such a unique gift for weaving intricate and engrossing tales. The author's use of various writing techniques is masterful and has resulted in a story that is sure to keep readers hooked from the beginning.

I must also commend the author on their strategic use of various writing skills, and pace, which have helped to make this novel a true masterpiece in my opinion.

Overall, I would highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a gripping and captivating story. The author's unique talent and writing style make this book a must-read for anyone looking for a truly unforgettable Chinese novels with drama and fresh content. Now i will go and read the rest of the chapters and hope the novels keep updating without any break ^^

Ok so let me put it this way.
Cover - Awesome, the author even made it themselves.
Title - Captivating
Synopsis - it pulls you right in. The plot seems really interesting and the little poem is just a work of art!
The execution of the story isn't lacking in any way and I really like the way the characters are described.

I guess the only thing I didn't like was that the chapters were really long.
But that's just due to personal preferences so its not a big deal.

The story is otherwise just amazing.
There are a few grammatical errors here and there but I think a little bit of editing abd proofreading can fix that.

Best of luck author!

The beginning really sets the tone going forward, with really great writing quality and character design. You loathe some while adore others. It give me huge ' red wedding' vibes from game of thrones. And although it happened early in the story, I cared about these deaths and the effect it would have on the FMC.
Overall solid foundation, can't wait for more writing from you!

Hi if you got as far as chapter 25 you would know this book is a good book,  it drives suspense and it becomes more and more intriguing this  book is better than most books I've read,  I would  give you a breakdown the girl Wakes up out of coma, she is married to a Master well -respected man he gives her the cold shoulder, she later finds out white I dont want to give to much detail,  but she goes out  into the city wearing a veil,  gets in some trouble her husband helps her not knowing it's is own wife, the two becomes closer where she learns her husband does love her,  he confess why he  treats he like that -he does not know the stranger his dining with  is his wife- they get drunk and he carries her to his place his respectful enough not to life her veil. This book deserves so much more,please lets get reviews and get this book up in the charts.

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O.M.G...This book is really amazing, I would give it a five star cause it is so good...
The name is really catchy, I love the plot too, it is so eye catching and amazing...
I would like to recommend this book to anyone and everyone that is looking for a good book to read cause it really spectacular, Can't stop reading it 😊😊...
A big thumbs up 👍 to the wonderful author

This novel has a compelling narrative flow and well-developed characters. Your writing style is truly engaging, making it a joy to progress through the chapters seamlessly. The main character is fascinating, I don't usually read female leads but your novel certainly shows how interesting your characters can be.

After reading 10 chapters of this book i can say that "This book is truly worth reading".Author know what he is doing.

This is really an awesome book, I love everything keep it up kudos to you Author.

Your story is really engaging so far. Also, this is my first time reading a Chinese novel on this platform, and it's also my first time reading a FL (female lead) Chinese novel. I have to say, it's absolutely amazing.

This was a good read. If you're into CN period stories with reincarnation , capable FL, and thrilling romance, check this out!

This book is so interesting I can't stop reading it ....I think am getting addicted to this awesome story ... Good job Author

Great read I love a strong female lead great story keep uo the giid wirk your in the come up

The best female lead story in my library so far. The book is so nice that I can't help but read it to the end. All fans of historical romance should not look further as this is the best work that satisfy them.✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️

An excellent read with great pacing and characters. You have a great writing style that is just pretty fun to follow, found myself just reading one chapter after the other. The MC is interesting and her story is very intriguing as well.

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This was a good read! Esp for girls like who just loooveee a capable MC. I like that we saw the tragedy that started it all, as well! Makes the improvement part even better. 

Not bad. Generic fl, but good quality updates. The other char as cters are a little 2d, but it isn't the worst I've seen by far. pretty good! keep going!!

To make the possession of Bai LiQin's body more ethical, perhaps the author could add a scene where YuQiao seeks permission from Bai LiQin's spirit before possessing her body. This could also add an interesting dynamic to the story and make it more unique.

The plot of the story is quite intriguing and has a good mix of mystery, suspense, and romance. The idea of a second chance at life after being murdered is interesting, and the addition of the magical elements adds an extra layer of excitement. However, the idea of possessing someone's body without their consent is a bit concerning and might be off-putting to some readers.