Sorry to say this, but ill be taking some time to set this story properly.
I had initially begun this out of desperation as I was losing my job to some unforeseen circumstances. But now that I've noticed that my novel is doing well, I wanted to properly go about writing it. So far, I have been writing and releasing as I go, which will lead to many problems later.
So I will be changing past chapters and building a backlog to have a consistent release schedule when I return.
If you think my story is worth it, please leave a comment to let me know what I could improve on.
I am in need of some constructive criticism as the nature of this story makes it difficult to find someone to review it.