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A boy named Pride who is fan of Yujiro Hanma's strength and also like one piece manga gets reincarnated into the world one piece with some none system based cheats~

With those cheats Pride is determined to stand at the top of the world.

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chapter 13 Well a great start for a great novel. Though the chapters are short I would love longer chapters. I think if you should at least write how MC train each powers in more detail an any problems MC might of had training them. Hopefully you got the MC a goal to achieve in later chapters. The crew selection well it depends on how big of a crew you want? I personally want you to get some fishmen an robin in your crew. Like really one piece world is made up of more water than land so it's depressing that fishmen are not a world power there. oh an in early chapters its ok for many timeskips I just hope you keep useing timeskips later on.  

Cool concept I love one piece already, cant wait to see where it goes. Apart from a few spelling and grammar mistakes this is really good, can tell your starting out would've loved this when I was so keep on writing.

Good story but I don't know what are you gonna do.He now his 13 years old and is stronger than the Admirals.
So please don't drop.

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Hanma blood in one piece

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Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Welcome to create on WEBNOVEL