(Author's Note: I have seen your comments on how Saber's sword should be called Excalibur Morgan, my mistake on First True Magic, and blah blah, guys I will try to do something about it also there is a survey at the end of my chapter so please fill it, it is just my survey about some stuff)
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3rd Pov
Tokiomi while sweating asked," Kirei! Kill the Hassans! Do it now!", his body was stiff while a knife was placed on his neck, and Elsa was holding it, she had grabbed her hand tightly and had already broken one of his wrists. Kirei without waiting any longer used his command seal and all the Hassan started killing themselves.
"You Bastard why the hell did you do that?!", Hassan screamed in anger as he stabbed himself, Kirei looked at the scene without any expression but one could see a small smile on his face if they were to look carefully, for some reason he felt happy and joy by the act seeing their betrayed and desperate expressions.
He simply said," You all are useless, you couldn't even stop a Homunculus with all your strength! Useless servants! This is what you deserve!", he felt better after insulting them and once all of them had killed themselves he looked at Elsa who was holding his Sensei a Hostage, he then asked," Now, that I have ordered to kill the servant, Miss please release my Sensei".
Elsa simply kicked Tokiomi's Buttock throwing him on Kirei who collapsed under him, she then left using a Mystic code that Medea gave her, one that allowed her to teleport. Kirei sighed in relief and thought,' What a monster, she was able to defeat all of the Hassans and Sensei and me together ', he then helped his Sensei whose Buttock was extremely red and was bleeding.
A small smile appeared on his face as he thought,' I don't understand but I feel happy seeing Sensei in misery ', and thus he started waking his secret side. As for how Elsa was able to take on all the Hassans, Tokiomi and Kirei are pretty simple, she already had parameters equal to a Low-Level servant comparable to the Hassans, and her mana was simply monstrous, so coupled with that Physical Strengthing Magic that Medea used on her via Mystic code she made for her.
It made her status even higher than Saber in Fate Stay Night, at least parameters-wise, so she ambushed them and took Tokiomi's Hostage, and easily defeated them.
(Author's Note: Now don't go on complaining how impossible it is, why did you make her stronger than a servant, guys Medea knows Physical Strengthening Magic way above anything else in fate, she used it on Souichirou at her weakest which was enough to beat a weakened Saber)
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(Author's Note: Guys I don't know the location of the Holy Grail)
Elsa arrived at the Editorium, she felt a huge amount of Evil and wanted to puke, she carefully came inside and saw a viscous red liquid filling up the floor, she wanted to quickly communicate with her Master using a Mental link when she saw a bright white lighting shining at a corner, the viscous red liquid started turning transparent and knowing who is doing this she quickly ran to there.
She saw that Medea and Saber are standing behind the Master while he using his Magic to cleanse the Holy Grail, a huge amount of Holy Aura radiated from him, knowing that he is using a Baptism but on a Huge and powerful scale. She silently walked near him and stood beside him waiting for him to finish his job.
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Neo pov
I opened my eyes smiling seeing Holy Grail, it now radiated a Holy Aura unlike before and a Huge amount of Mana I can sense from it, even more than what everyone here had combined and that would be barely 1/10th it has. I sighed in relief happy that I finished it without any mistakes. Then I looked behind seeing Medea, Saber, and Elsa.
Medea came forward and said," Excellent master, the Holy Grail is purified and now can be used without any repercussions to summon Greater Grail", Saber nodded and said," I am happy that my King you managed to get what you desired", she looked at Holy Grail then at me.
Elsa also cheerfully said," I am happy that Master you Managed to get what you wanted!", I smiled and hugged her making Medea and Saber Jealous, after that, I looked at the three and asked," Now that I have won the war and we finally have the Grail, you can ask your wish if you have, especially you Medea".
Her smile disappeared upon hearing that and she looked at me reluctantly before releasing a sigh, she asked me in a nervous tone," Master I don't have any wish that I want to fulfill using Holy Grail but my wish is something that you can fulfill if I am not asking too much can I continue to stay with you Master?", she hung her head down waiting nervously for an answer.
Saber's and Elsa's eyes perked hearing her, and then without waiting any further, I said," Medea if you want to stay with me then please explain the whole thing and reason", hearing that she trembled and then replied," I-I love you Master! and I just want to be with you!", after shouting that she blushed deeply and tried teleporting away but I stopped her, then hugging her I replied," Listen Medea, no need to be nervous okay? I also have come to love you, so you can continue to live with me if you want".
She nodded her head and snuggled on my chest in embarrassment, after a few minutes we broke our hug while Saber and Elsa looked at her with Deadpan looks, Medea gave them a proud look, making them jealous, seeing their fight I flicked my fingers on their forehead, "Ouch!", yelped the three girls.
I said seriously," Listen Here, I don't want any fighting between you all Okay? Otherwise I won't talk to any of you if you fight", hearing me they became panicked and nodded obediently, I nodded seeing that and then looked at Elsa and Saber, " Master I don't have any wish", said Elsa, then looking at Saber who kneeled before me and said," I thank My Lord for his generosity, but I don't desire it, I already my wish fulfilled my serving my King".
After that, I used grail to summon the Greater Grail and found myself in a place surrounded by flowers and a sexy Einzbern Homunculi, Justeaze Lizrich von Einzbern's eyes twinkled seeing me and she said," Congratulations on winning the Holy Grail War, now please state your wish".
Although she was sexy, my Elsa was still better, so I lost interest in her and without any further waiting I said," I want the Third True Magic, Heaven's Feel", she looked at me blankly and then after a bit said," Granted".
Wait just like that? I mean I didn't expect it but, soon I saw a screen in front of me and heard a voice in my mind.
[Congratulations to the user acquiring the Third True Magic Heaven's Feel! Rank: EX++]
[User has won the Holy Grail War! Calculating the points acquired...]
[3432 Gacha points have been acquired!]
I smiled widely upon seeing that and Justeaze just looked at me blankly, coughing a bit then, I said," Thank you Miss for giving me the True Magic", she tilted her head and replied," You are weird". I chuckled hearing that and soon my surrounding started breaking down, and I returned.
To be continued...
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