Hi guys,

i was stoking Chapter and while at it, I start to think that if I keep going on the story like that it probably will get boring for a few reasons

1- the power scale is completely out of twilight my MC to Op that he may kill anyone with a *snap* of a finger, so who i will make him fight?

2- there is no real use to 'AF' in twilight

3- although twilight has action, it's still romance at its core

4- I am a stile novice writer so I will probably bite more than I could chew and end stop writing this fanfic

so I will take slow and rewrite the story, but this time I will make things simple and easy to follow, and hold on the rather things until I think of fanfic in a world with the more strong power system.

also if you have any ideas on how to better my writing, I am all ears

thanks for reading