JelJurDrog

This is the story of a man that one day woke up in the world that he once knew as a game. The problem is he is not the protagonist and will have to find his own way in the dangerous world of Skyrim. But hey, at least he has magic now!!

===The cover art is not mine if the original creator of the art wants to remove it please contact me===

Hello everyone I started the rewrite of the story if there is any one of you who read it before I have gone on hiatus you may want to skip to the 4th chapter, though I would recommend you to start reading from the start in order to refresh you memory.


It’s not bad, but it is REALLY hard to know WHERE the start and end of a person talking is. 

I would recommend using “person talking” around speaking and ‘person thinking’ for unspoken words. Using a - just made it very hard to read and it really turned me off.

Otherwise, it looked pretty good and seemed like a good start to the story, I hope it works out for you.

The start was good the English was tolerable needed abit more work, but good nonetheless, it's the latter chapters which the author gets things mixed up, like genders and names, it was a really beautiful beginning, alas, it wasn't meant to be as the author wasn't ready to spend more effort or have his writing edited.

Me está encantando la historia 10/10
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Thirst for magic

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Rewrite Notice.