madiha_masood

the boy who has everything except love and the girl who struggles for everything,do you think their fate paths of these people will meet?

Pakistan

Good book , I don't usually read romance and all but this is quite interesting and amazing. Definitely worth a read.

I love romance stories so why not give it a read. liked it. Best of luck in your story. Hoping to get some good plot in the upcoming chapters as well.

though I do not usually read this genre, but I found this one interesting. 
good characters,much better writing and would like constant update for it

I really do love the fascinating plot, I must say the book is really intriguing and interesting ☺️☺️, I really do love it so very much ..
Keep it up author 😘

Interesting and amusing. The plot was also fascinating. Just some gramatical and punctuation mistakes here and there, which could be corrected easily. 
Good Work Author! Keep it up! 
Waiting for more updates.

It's a nice and interesting take on the romance genre. They type of romance depicted is intriguing and compels you to read more, it's excellent. I would advise to spend more time on the protagonist's inner thoughts and to proofread. Otherwise I like it😁👏🏾😊

It's sweet, it's uncomplicated sad it's immensely enjoyable. Just five chapters in and I'm really intrigued to find out how these two will end up together! Great work!

Just 5 chapters and thE plot is so great? Please author Go on with it😍😍😍😍

I like it!!!!
The story is compelling
You just need to proofread it once before posting.The minor errors kind of leave a bad first impression to such a great story.

I like the plot and looking at how the story goes, I think the author has a good grasp to where the story will go. Chapters need to be edited as there are mistakes everywhere. Although some sentences are difficult to swallow, I like the concept of the book so, I will be looking forward to the next few updates. Good Luck, Author! 😃

First of all, the cover is lovely. I only read few chapters so I can’t say much about the characters yet. But the plot is interesting. I don’t mind reading further. 

So all the best author


Aight so only 5 chapters are released yet. This book is actually good, though it can be improved in several ways. The author is doing a great job developing the story, I won't say you would be hooked up right away but yeah you will be a bit later. 
good luck Author.

The plot is easy to understand and well-structured which makes me look forward to what is happening next. I have taken interest in what's going on in this book.

I am happy to be the first person to review this novel. I love this type of romance plot. Please keep up the good work I am looking forward to how far the story progresses. 

SHE IS MY FIRST LOVE