Captain_Erebus

Morocco

Hey there dear readers i hope everyone is doing okay, i just wanted everyone to know the reason why I deleted all the chapters from this story. 

First of all I like the fanfic, it was the first book that I wrote and i'm really proud that i managed to finish it. However, after finishing it and going back to read it again I realized that I've made a lot of mistakes that have dropped the quality of the book, specially in the early chapters and although I liked how it turned out in the end I still want to go back and fix some things, that's why i decided that I will do a rewrite.

The story will not be drastically different for the most parts, it will roughly have the same progression with some changes in characters and some of the arcs. The MC 'Ashen' will be the same and the crew might have some changes here and there. If you have any suggestions feel free to leave them here.

Also since this book is marked as completed I won't be able to upload the chapters here unfortunately so i will be creating a new book for that, and on last thing I will let you know that I haven't started writing yet, I don't know when I will and I don't know how long this rewrite is gonna take but the only thing that I can promise you is that it's going to be better and more epic than the previous one.

After all this is the story of the man who will conquer the world and become the strongest pirate...'Demon of the Sea' Ashen!



Hi there! I am the authour of this one piece fan fiction. I hope you enjoy reading the story.
Please leave a review and tell me your opinion about it.

I have only read couple chapters but unfortunately story is already just totally ridiculous. For one, mc doesn't have name, secondly he just suddenly learnt Tekkai without any actual training or instruction. Athor is applying classic logic of seeing something done in manga or whatnot and somehow that translates to them being able to learn it. Is he going to build iPhone next? :D 
I mean soru is relatively simple, even though training it is probably really hard without correct methods, but stuff like tekkai would definitely need proper detailed training. If these were so easy to copy, they would already be spread everywhere. 

Pretty solid One Piece fanfic right here.

The story feels very rushed and I say it as both a good thing and a bad thing. I read several very good One Piece fanfics where MC gathers his crew slowly and the story drags on. And they never get anywhere since at the pace they are going, it would take 500-700 chapters to finish.

Meanwhile here, MC is doing the speed run, while also having much important time skips. And so even though there are only 80 chapters out right now, the story already went quite a distance. There is no as much detail put into everything but nonetheless, it's a good story and the next time I look up this bookmark, I can expect to find it finished.

A finished One Piece fanfic? I read only two, so i look forward to reading the third.

Regardless back to this. We have good MC, lots of good OCs and lots of good fights. The story feels rushed but because of that, it never drags on and feels boring. The beginning is still normal, with author developing his MC and main crew but at some point, he steps on the pedal and it's go go go.

Since it's like this just enjoy the rocket speed ride.

A very one dimensional fast paced boring fanfiction. A one piece fanfiction needs to be more than just sailing from one island to next, having sudden powerups and long narrated fights. It needs elements of kingdom building, information gathering, building alliances, weakening the opponent before the actual fight, betrayals.

without cheat its just plain and boring typical one piece story  where mc is another luffy who get crew fight stronger opponent and grow stronger with plot armer... nothing new its same story with decent mc 

Pls stop using all caps. It just makes the mc and all other characters look stupid. 



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It's a Good fanfic. I really hope this one to continue until finished. Good job author. It's a Good fanfic. I really hope this one to continue until finished. Good job author. 

A good fanfic, with a mc character suitable for that world he can kill without a doubt if it's his enemies.................................................................................................................................

THIS IS THE BEST OP FF TO EXIST ......I HAVE FOUND IT !!!!!!!THE GREATEST OP FF IS REALLLLLLLLLL

Very good fanfic I've been looking for good fics to be able to read but they've all been very weird but yours has impressed me because it's not like the others who just reincarnated and already had the power of god with them, I like the way you developed to the different characters and how you paid to tell us about each past of the characters, so I congratulate you and continue with the fanfic that is brutal

Good fanfik. 
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really good. hope the author will complete the whole fanfic and don't just drop it.

Pretty good fanfic, mc rational but sometimes go crazy in dangereous condition and mc not very smart just have standard intelegent but cauitous enough. Mc crew member also have good background to reveal in future

Well this was an absolutely different look to the Mera Mera no mi devil fruit.
The character build up is quite steady and his partner too are well thought out though some episodes seem rushed but a great novel altogether.

perfect ending. Now we can concentrate on the Kid fanfic

Está historia de verdad te hace entender al personaje principal y el porque es como es no se guía solo del canon sino que da un cierre perfecto para alguien como ashen 

I have a doubt author ... will our Mc be able to use true potential of flame fruit??? after all magma highest temperature  is around 2700 c but highest flame is 3300 c... in Canon... ace did not reach its full potential.... and it's a wrong statement to say flame temperature is less than magma.

Absolutely love it. 
One of the best One Piece fanfics you can ever read the story is very exciting and the suspense is killing me. I didn't even realize that I caught up with the latest chapter.

in two days finished this gem until time-being released chapters 
wooooooow everything perfect

Hâte de voir ce qu’il fera avec le mera-mera no mi. Hâte de voir les nouveaux Nakamas qu’il se fera sans l’histoire, les aventure mais surtout quand il va fracasser akainu, insha’Allah. 

One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)