NocturnOwl

Hi everyone. Your probably wondering where my story went. I decided to enter WSA with gene system. New releases will be restructured entirely going forward. If you enjoyed my work and want to follow along for the future the name will be the same however the cover will be different. Thank you everyone for following my story so far it really does mean a lot. I'm going to go forward just like my characters, So get ready for the future of Gene system ;D.

I've decided in the end, that I want to enter Gene system in the WSA 2023. It was a hard decision to republish into the contest considering everything that was built up. But I have faith it will work out. Thank you all for reading my story it means a lot. The future is going to be bright. Gene system will be restructured entirely. Making the overall reading process more enjoyable then before. If you want to follow along still, Gene system will be under the same name but have a different cover then this one. 


Thank you all once again, It going to be a fun journey :D


Hi! ive been wanting to make time to review this since you reviewed mine not long ago and now I finally have a chance!
this is my first time writing a review so sorry if its all over the place.
I've read up to chapter 21 as of this review
pros:
to start off I really enjoy the addition of Zeus into blakes life. I think often times when a main character goes through multiple gloomy experiences during the story its very hard to balance it out and bring them emotional stability. I think zues in a way has become that anchor for blakes emotions by his ability to uplift his mood through a couple of lines here and there.

Blake as a character is clearly holding a lot of his emotions bottled up and I'm sure as the story progresses, we will see him open up more. This story does a good job of making the reader worry about blakes mental instability as if we are a part of his family.

so far I have enjoyed the mystery of the world and cant wait till Blake dives deeper into his fathers past.
cons:
as for cons the biggest thing I can think of is to try to separate everything into smaller paragraphs. I read the first 10 chapters on my phone and it can be hard to understand stuff sometimes.

I actually have this problem as well and lately i have found that going back and just separating certain sentences can make the overall flow of the story appear much more fluid

overall I enjoyed the story so far and cant wait to see your improvement and blakes journey

Family love is at the heart of this story and I felt a lot of emotions reading this book. It also has a spark of adventure to it and mystery as Blake our main character bravely perseveres despite his circumstances. Well written and thought provoking, a good read for anyone wanting to read an inspiring story with a smack of adventure right in the middle.

Review -
This novel explores the themes of genetic engineering and human evolution. With well-developed characters and an intricate plot, this book takes readers on a thrilling journey filled with action, drama, and suspense. 
The author skillfully blends science fiction with real-world issues, making the story both thought-provoking and entertaining. Overall, "Gene System" is a must-read for fans of the sci-fi genre.

GS 夲

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Note for my Readers :D