NineSleepyDragons

Check out my other novel. I Am a Necromancer in A Cultivation World


Humanity had gradually been assimilated by the all powerful system and placed into their very own Haven. Competing against themselves and other races,humanity was constantly embroiled in a struggle for survival and dominance.

Leon, a simple soldier for humanity, was sure that he had died once he felt his head swept off of his shoulders. So you can just imagine his disbelief once he found himself not in the afterlife but back at the start of it all.

The day humanity descended into their very own hell

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First of all, let's get down to business. The novel is good if you are going to ignore unusually short chapters and a repetitive paragraphs (ex. last paragraph of a chapter 10 is first paragraph of chapter 11). A few more problems, but nothing too serious. Good points are many, and I loved all 29 chapters I read. Yes, 29, not 14 which are released by the time of this review. This brings us to the question, why did you abandon the old novel and basically copy pasted it again, just with less chapters? I'd love you to answer and to keep in mind the bad points I mentioned. The novel is good, don't get me wrong, it's just that I want it to be better. Also, if you, author, want peak fiction, I recommend studying human relations, habits, natural behaviors as well as reactions. Basically, psihology. I recommend a book, how to win friends and influence people, it may not bring to light all the points you need, but it will surely make your character writing go from a (generous) 4, to at least 6.

great story thus far, just the updates stability really. it hasn't updated in a while when righting this.                                                 l

I have read all the chaps and gotta say, it's amazing! but the updating stability....

I've caught up to all 33 chapters. I enjoy it. Although I do hate Lucas to be honest, heck I wouldn't even mind Jeff instead but it seems Lucas will be here to stay as one of the main casts, considering how he caught the attention of demon baal.

Global Descent: My Soul is Incorruptible!