Hi everyone, it's me again and as you can see, I'm back with a new story (And again I want to apologize for the last one). And to avoid my last mistake, I started writing differently, which is to write a bunch of chapters and post them, so far, I've written 36 chapters, which I'll post as I edit them, at least every couple of days.
What are the pros of writing this way? First of all, I won't have the constraints on posting chapters that sometimes made me have to write through effort. Also, if I quit, you wouldn't know about it (I quit this story once when I got tired of writing, and I also took a couple of breaks). This will give me a much better chance of getting back to the story if I get tired.
Okay. Now about what I want to point out moments before I start.
1) Writing mistakes.
These chapters were supposed to be something like the main character's flashbacks, but sometimes I failed and it was written in first person. (Because of this, the beginning will be a bit tedious.
Character of the main character. Sometimes he changes, but not seriously.
Sometimes I wasn't good at writing conversations, so they may be a little unrealistic.
Sometimes there will be mistakes in the story itself.
Plot holes. I kind of made a few of them, but not anything that would affect the story much. Also, I noticed mistakes in the original work, I will write about that.
And my biggest problem is that I left hints for the main character, because I wanted to introduce the world better or describe a certain point. You'll know what I'm talking about, but please ignore that.
2) System.
There will be a lot of it in the beginning for the sake of introducing the main character's capabilities or describing moments, but over time it will be mentioned a couple of times per chapter. This will also be mentioned later on.
About the system itself. It will be combined with what the system is supposed to be and with some Skyrim game mechanics (This is the best example I came up with).
3) Harem.
It's hard to explain, it will be there, but you won't see it. It will form during the story, and its implications will be after the story. That way I'll make it enjoyable for harem lovers and not spoil it for the rest of you. And it reduces the chances of killing the story because of the harem, since I'm afraid I might ruin the story because of it. And of course, during the storyline, the harem won't be much of a problem, but afterwards, it's great for rebuilding humanity. Especially with a main character with an excellent gene pool.
Composition:
1) Junko Enoshima (Confirmed)
2) Chiaki Nanami (Confirmed)
3) Aoi Asahina (Subject to correction)
4) Kyoko Kirigiri (Cannot be corrected)
4) Basic.
The character of the main character is not like the original Yasuke as it is a different person, only with the same appearance.
I want to remind you from the beginning that the main character was an ordinary person, and Junko is an "Ultimate Analyst ". So, it will be hard for him to hide anything from her.
If you write a critique. Please write my mistakes. How and what to correct. So that I can take these points into account in the future.
And this is just to brag. My typing speed has increased significantly in the last month, so I will write much faster.
The first few chapters will be small, as I was warming up. The rest will be bigger.