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Chapter 2 - Please read this

Before u read this book I would like you to know that this book is not finished in any form. I would also like you to know I have not expirnce at writing story. Why I am posting this is so I can gain other people feedback and to see if anyone would willing to help with grammar/charter/plot and many other things so plz instead hating this give feed back with what I can do better. I will also edit the chapter while I make the book. Please enjoy

P.s: this is my discord is if anyone is willing to help or give me ideas mohamed kamara#4033