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An Extra Otherworlder

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*disclaimer this is kind of a frame think like a draft if you read this within 2023 or earlier 2024 so be prepared for cringe beyond you comprehension.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1

Authors note this is not a good story it's a good idea though and I'm as at writing but I'm still continuing this story so please comment it shows my mistakes and gives motivation

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The Story starts 3rd person

There is a light smell of fire in the air and smoke lightly fills the background of a small room filled with chairs and small pieces of wood with equipment littering the desks and a few bodies littered the floor .

A young boy points a rifle at a group of students as a black-haired boy quietly limps toward him and goes slowly to his side whispers into the boy's ear. "Timmy Tim Tim boy you think you can kill me? No n-no boyo you can't.".

The black-haired boy giggles with his mind clouded with hysteria looking as the irritating face of Tim slowly morphs into a terrified expression, He absolutely was infatuated with Tim's fear. Tim tries to turn and shoot the boy but the black-haired boy grabs his chin and…

*crack

Turns his head upside down.

Tim collapses onto the floor and the gracious killer looks down on him "Rather disgusting ay?" And he starts to breathe unsteadily as he stares into nothing "Well see ya later... actually no, I'm better than… you all ." Those were the last words the black-haired boy said looking into a wall before he collapsed.

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40 minutes earlier black-haired boys POV

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"Fuck, Spanish class is my first period today, "A blonde kid says loudly

"Don't cuss in my classroom Jack or you will be sent to the office. Again" said an older lady

"With all due respect, Ms.B school technically has not started though I am on school grounds" replied Jack in a irritated, straight tone drawing out a sigh from the teacher.

"Jack, why are you so... bitter today? Is it because of Spanish class, or something else?" I ask

He lets out a depressed sigh " They got rid of the beast energy drink vending machine. Why would they do that." After Jack says the last part he wipes a nonexistent tear from his face

"I do not have a clue, Maybe it was the fact that some 11th grader with rich parents got a heart attack and the school almost got sued? Well, I assume that." I mutter with my voice nearly dripping with sarcasm

"What are you going to do today?" He asks

"Well I am little tired but got metal fabrication so that's good then carpentry I think that's pretty neat then I also have Spanish class. I can't exactly remember the wor-letters of alphabet but I got the words down flawlessly... ish." I look up and try to remember the first letters of the Spanish alphabet.

I then look at him ", And you what do you have? "

"The same as always. " He mutters with his posture leaning forward letting his chin rest on his arms

I then feel something is off something strange and from behind me I hear

"Hello it is I John superior in the ways of woodworking." From a man behind me.

"Damn ,John you would make a….killing in assassination with how you manage to somehow practically teleport you scared me." I chuckle at my joke while both John and Jack are trying to look serious but I see their lips twitching

"Anyways I saw the birdhouse you made it looked very nice. Good job painting."

"Thanks,anyways I have woodworks first so I'm going to build another birdhouse."

*beep

I cringe at the sound of the intercom and wait for the announcements

"Hello kids the lunch for today will be chicken nuggets, celery, applesauce, yogurt, and milk. Now stand for the pledge of allegiance." Says the principal of the school Through the interconnection and then it switches to a young girl's voice "I pledge-." I stand up and put my hand on my chest and mutter the pledge of allegiance.

"Ahem," Ms. B clears her through and goes through the attendance "Aaron" "Here"

"Aron" "Here" "Brad" "Here" "Braydan" "Hi" "Brayden C" "Here" "Brayden I" "You what" "want you to be normal" that lets out a few snickers and the teacher goes on.

I zone out until my name is called "Max" "Here" and then I zone out again.

*beep

The advisory eventually ends and I then leave the classroom

"Bye Jack and John have a wonderful day"

"You too Max" is the reply from Jack

"Yeah" muttered John

I then calmly walked to the bathroom to well use the restroom once I'm done I wash my hands and walk to my class and avoid looking at the women walking in the same hallway because I hope to be a gentleman. Thinking if I seemed off I walk to my class I hear some loud thudding and screaming in the woodwork section right next to my class and with my mind filled with thoughts I slightly open the door and I stubble over my feet and in the class 'fuck my life this is awkward, no that's gay.'

I look up and I notice a boy with a rifle yelling about how this is revenge and that they never should have messed with him.

I remember this man from somewhere I don't know his name but I remember he was an idiot that always complained and picked fights with people and ran away or got knocked out from light hits. he also had no women. Well, I had none but I chose that.

It takes him a second to notice me. When he does he turns around and shoots seven bullets with bad posture. Most are off by a bit ,but I move avoiding one shot but three still hit. One grazed my leg one in the stomach and one in the chest and I fall due to the force of the bullets.

"See this is what happens when you mess with me!" He yells sounding like the incompetent bastard he is.

'He has terrible aim. I was only a few feet away.' Disappointed in his marksmanship assuming that he was trying to hit me in the chest with all of the shots and how he handled the recoil I facepalm silently.

''Well, I guess this is the end for me. The pain is unbearable it . It … It doesn't hurt it feels completely numb actually.' I poke my wounds to check and stop for a second.

''Wait a fucking moment I can move my hands so.' I shake my foot 'Well it seems the bullet grazed my leg though I am losing a lot of blood' looking at the small puddle dripping from my chest. 'Did he manage to hit my heart by luck?' I check my nonexistent pulse

' I'm dead. Fuck damn it!' I think and look up ' I got shot I'm so weak but I'm stronger than him I'm better .' I see him rambling about how he is the best and most powerful 'How the hell does someone get such a big ego when he is weak? He is a disgrace to all people, pathetic. What does power mean to him? He has to use a gun to kill. But I.. my mind is getting hazy day isn't it. My sweet bl.. oxygen juice is leaking.'

I take a small breath to focus. 'And since my heart is gone I shouldn't need to breathe I should concentrate. I need to get up if I can.'

I push myself up slowly 'I can stand and I'm no longer losing blood. I'm awesome now I'll die slower. I wonder if I can walk to him and Kil… confuse him .' I think and listen to his long monologue as I stumble and limp roughly 7 feet across the tiled floors toward him. As I go my wounds reopen creating a small trail of blood.

To distract him I whisper in his ear

"Timmy Tim Tim boyo you think you can kill me? No, you can't." I look at his face and laugh wondering if I look like a cool psycho or an idiot. I don't even think Tim is his name but it did the job. He is frozen in what is hopefully fear.

I notice that he is starting to calm down and he tries to turn so I panic ' He's going to shoot me so I need to disarm him but I don't think I can because that'd use too much energy but the neck. I think I might be able to crush his trachea. His jugular and carotid artery should be off the table since I can't puncture it. Why am I thinking fast.' I refocus myself

'And I can't paralyze him. Well won't , but I think but If I move their chin to their ear it will snap it so they die okay let's try that no holding back.' I grab his chin and I am about to also grab his head to make it easier but I notice that he is almost facing me somewhat so I decide to just do it with one hand. I yank upwards using my extra height to turn it easier and manage to fully turn his head upside down and Tim collapses on the ground I look down at him 'Huh I guess you could say I look down on you… That's… peculiar my vision is getting worse it's turning black. I can feel pain now. '

I look down. "Rather disgusting, ay?" I mutter at the body then my vision is gone. I look at where the students are supposed to be "Fuck I'm going to die now see you later. I'm better than all of you."

'His head do a 180 a one 18-' I stop myself from thinking deliriously and realize what this is for a second and then I feel myself falling and hitting the ground. As I lay on the ground I think of my life what it means and the purpose of everything while feeling the pain. Then I take a deep breath then I finally give up on living and relax.

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And that's a chapter end again I will pretty much never update this since twenty chapters are in my head also comment when you see something misspelled I hopefully with fix it