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"Ara!" exclaimed the two in turn. They looking for Sarah.
Sarah looked at Max and Raphael in turns. Sarah's heart still hurts so she approached Max instead of her own future husband. Raphael gapes because Sarah prefers another man tham him. The girl who usually stick like a glue now goes.
"Why are you crying??" Max saw tears still dripping from his eyeballs.
"Fig!!" Call Raphael.
"Did he make you cry?" Max pointed at Raphael while holding Sarah's body which was shivering cold in his arms.
Sarah just nodded in response. Sarah's heart began to cool just like the temperature of the night today. The cold froze all over his body which was wet from the rain water. Max draped his coat over Sarah's shoulders so she wouldn't shiver from the cold.
"Let's go." Max opened the car door.
"Wait!!" Raphael approached when Sarah was already in the car. Max held Raphael's chest, looking at him intently.
