SOOUK

a 15 yo boy named takashi who was orphaned at the age of 5 and it's taken up by a Yakuza leader but dies in a shootout


( I just made a 2000 word synthesis I didn't see my laptop was on 1 and my fingers hurt now so I'll probably just relate the same synthesis in a couple hours

United States

First chapters need to be longer. use inverted commas for conversations, speech and pov. Use enough spaces between each sentence. Synopsis needs to be in more detail, if you want people to read this then you need to explain a little about this fic and how you plan to take mc's character

please give me all the criticism I'm a new Arthur and I need comments on how to improve it I'll probably publish 2 or 3 more today

a dark red soul just floating in darkness suddenly a bright light appears in The Old Man and white robes with a long beard appear and say "hello you have 3 wishes"   "what!?" I said not believing but the old man said "hurry up" said the old man "before I make you randomly get powers" ok ok I said let me think" 'what should I wish for' I thought


Came here for the #villain tag, so giving you 5 stars cuz of it. Hopefully Mc is actually evil and not some budget trash antihero. Will wait till more chapters are out before reading

mha: villainous Craftsman(dropped for the time being)

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - 1