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In the tapestry of my existence, my path was predetermined, my fate sealed. It was a bitter pill to swallow, realizing that my happiness was not mine to claim, but rather a pawn in a grand cosmic design.

I felt like a marionette, strings tugged by an unseen maestro, dancing to a tune I did not compose. My purpose reduced to a mere sentinel, guarding someone of immense power who had no need for my presence.

Ah, how amusing! My entire life, a punchline to an elaborate joke.

 Alora Smith, a woman of diverse heritage, blissfully unaware of the storm brewing around her. That is, until she crossed paths with a towering, enigmatic figure who whisked her away from the comforting confines of her sheltered city, thrusting her into a world teetering on the edge of calamity.

Overnight, she found herself entangled in a realm of fiery chaos, where celestial forces clashed in a battle of epic proportions. Initially dismissing it all as a figment of her imagination, Alora questioned whether she was merely a hapless mortal ensnared in a fantastical illusion. But could she be mistaken?

Now, the looming question hangs in the air: will Alora succumb to the relentless grip of the three Moirai, the sisters of fate, or will she rise against them, defying their script and forging her own destiny?



Find out more in the first book of the Children Of A.

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Hello, Howdy, Hola, γεια σας, Ni hao, Salut, annyeonghaseyo, hallo, ciao, privet, kumusta, namaste, bawo!


That's hello in 13 different languages, rest assured I don't know how to speak all those languages 😭


Comment hello in your language so I can add it!!!!!


Conquering Moirai is my present new book well I wouldn't say "new" since it's a remodified version of Heavenly Fate. I don't know how many of you have seen Heavenly Fate already and might find reading CM from the very beginning boring because you're already familiar with the storyline but I promise you that reading it again wouldn't be a waste of time because I plan to get you hooked to it.


I'm putting my very best in this book and I welcome any corrections or additions but not criticism, not that it can be avoided but still I'll appreciate every love and support you give me.


PS: What do you guys think about the title and book cover? I welcome any suggestions.


In the novel "Children Of A," the author paints a vivid tapestry of emotions, cosmic design, and destiny. Through compelling excerpts, we glimpse the life of the protagonist, Alora Smith, as she navigates a world teetering on the edge of calamity. The story delves into the complexities of Alora's existence, where her path appears predetermined, leading her to confront celestial forces and her own fate.

In the opening paragraph, the author masterfully employs a metaphorical tapestry to describe the intricacies of Alora's life. She realizes that her happiness is not solely hers to claim but rather a pawn in a grand cosmic design. This introspective moment sets the tone for the novel, immediately captivating readers with its depth and philosophical musings.

As we delve deeper into Alora's life, the author uses colloquial language to describe her everyday struggles. From her grueling work routine as a biochemist to her yearning for relaxation, the narrative strikes a balance between technical details and relatable storytelling. However, the transitions between certain scenes could be smoother, providing more cohesive links between Alora's frustrations and her coworker Samantha's enthusiasm, which would further engage the reader.

A significant aspect of the story revolves around Alora's enigmatic grandmother. Through the protagonist's eyes, we catch glimpses of this mysterious woman who wields outrageous wealth and eccentricities. Yet, while she remains elusive, the reader yearns for a deeper understanding of their relationship and backstory, which would amplify the intrigue surrounding Alora's predicament.

One of the strengths of the novel lies in the portrayal of Alora's internal struggles. As she questions her fate and seeks answers, the author deftly conveys her mix of anxiety and anticipation. However, there is an opportunity to enrich the narrative by incorporating more of Alora's thoughts and emotions during pivotal moments, such as her encounter with the brain surgeons. Adding a window into her mind would allow readers to empathize further with her character and invest even more deeply in her journey.

However, I'd say there's room for improvement too. While the author manages to capture the essence of Alora's existence, there are moments that could use a bit more depth. For instance, during certain critical scenes, it would be great to have even more insight into Alora's thoughts and emotions. A few extra lines here and there could elevate the suspense and tug at the reader's heartstrings even more. Another key point is to make sure Adora comes off as more likeable! A main character who is outwardly described as so many things, can be a bit tropey! Make sure to strike a good balance.

But all in all, "Children Of A" is a compelling and engaging read. I'm excited to see how Alora's story unfolds as she faces the storms of change and tackles the untold challenges ahead... With some refinements in flow, deeper character introspection, and tighter narrative integration, the novel has the potential to leave readers spellbound, eagerly turning each page to discover the fate of Alora Smith and the celestial forces that shape her destiny... (who knows, lol)

Reading this book was akin to diving into the heart of a coral reef. The characters were as colorful and compelling as the diverse marine life that inhabits such ecosystems.

The plot weaved in and out like a swift current, its unpredictability keeping me engaged and curious. Each chapter was like a glimpse into a new, breathtaking piece of the reef, full of wonder and awe.

To sum it up, if you're on the hunt for a narrative as riveting as the exploration of an exotic underwater realm, this book should be your next dive.

Rating: 5/5 stars. As refreshing as a plunge into clear, tropical waters!

First I would like to say that I never read Heavenly fate nor have I ever found any interest in Female MC novel but today I discovered this gem, only read till chapter 2 but my interest is already peaked. Pacing is perfect, the mystery is good, no problem with grammar, Just great. Still reading the novel that's why my review could be incomplete. But I still hope the author continues it

Amazing, I love the fact that you rewriting heavenly fate but then it doesn't seem boring at all because you really spiced it up 😘

Can't wait for when Alora meets the angel she's meant to protect 😂
I meet angel's protect humans not the other way around. Poor Alora she's really gonna have a hard time keeping up. 

Conquering Moirai

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Author's Note