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He covered his face with his hands to cool down the heat that came with unknown speed. His heart raced like a rat that was running from a cat. He wished there was a way out of this dilemma.
"What are we going to do, bro?" Salem asked, in a low tone. The women were staring directly at them. They were curious about their discussion. "Let's go upstairs, they won't stop looking at us."
Karan slowly brought his hands down and spoke "Let's go to the room. They will soon ask what we are discussing."
Saraswati stood far from them. She wondered what has happened. The boys loved keeping secrets away from her but she hope it was not what she was thinking.