The next day, show Fein's daily routine. A slice of life. Use show, not tell. Include dialogue and monologue. Make the narration detailed as much as possible.
The sun was already up and the rays of light pierced through the window. Fein slowly opened his eyes and stretched his arms. He got out of bed and headed to the bathroom to freshen up. After brushing his teeth and washing his face, he walked to his closet and picked out his black suit, paired with a white shirt and black tie. He dressed himself quickly, his movements efficient and precise.
Fein headed to the kitchen where his mother, Melissa, was already preparing breakfast. She noticed him and greeted him with a warm smile, "Good morning, Fein. Did you sleep well?"
Fein responded with a nod and a small smile. "Yes, I did. What's for breakfast today, mom?"
Melissa replied, "I made your favorite, eggs benedict with bacon and avocado. And of course, a cup of black coffee to start your day."
