Chapter 16 - please read

Hello everyone

thank you for reading my story so far I was wondering if you could leave a comment and let me know what you think about it I don't care if the comments are good or bad. I just want everyone's honest option so. This is my first time riding a time-traveling story

. Like I said just let me know what you think of it do you like it or do you hate it. Any suggestions on how I can improve it how I can get you to like it more.

Thank you for listening

sincerely Angelgirl100