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The Inner Thoughts of a Critic

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Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

In a town not far away from the city of Jamaica, an excavating crew made exclusively of the towners are having a discussion among themselves and the town mayor on the discovery of the relics they found in the mine that they were digging.

This was in the year 2002,the year before everything occurred. The year before the whole world went to shit, and the year before the box of pandora was opened.

Jake, a tall lean man with little to no muscles at all is the leader of the crew. His fiancee, Diane, is beside him but from the bulge that can be seen in her stomach...she was either eating too much or she was pregnant.

I think I will have to go with the latter(lol).

She is a beauty that fits the description to the toe of a town beaut but she surely has her competition...her best friend Jane who dresses like a Tom boy is also a beaut but because of her choice of clothes it's not always noticeable. But on the day she put on a dress, that was the day that the whole town knew that there were two apocalyptic beauties in the town.

Looking at me going of track, the name of the town in this thriller story is the Butter bread town...😏...The town got its name through the factory in its center that made the one and only Delicate and delicious Butterbread snack at the creation of the town. Most of the inhabitants of the town worked in the factory until the untimely and unfortunate death of the owner and Inventor, Sir James D. It seems like he took the recipe to his grave as he never told anybody the whole process of the ingredients and its making and what made it special(what a b*st*rd).

The factory was unfortunately closed and the residents had to find a new way of life and it came to them a couple of years later... Excavation of Relics and Fossils of the olden days.

The youths of the community who had a passion of blowing stuff up and digging pits were estatctic about this new job and were the first ones to begin the project. Jake as the most popular guy in the town became the leader and that's where he met Diane and Jane among other of their friends and became close as wolves.