confused4you

Story about Finn Lucius Belmont, a star football player from Kansas moves to Beacon Hill with his mom looking for a new start. But there are mysterious surrounding his past and the new town they call home.

I don't own anything except the Oc. And my writing can be a bit grammatically bad sometimes so keep it in mind.

India

I like how you're portraying the character and moving the plot along also thanks for not including Allison as the love interest though I am still hoping you make it Malia.

There are no plotholes that have come up yet though the MC is not a werewolf like the ones seen in teen wolf so it adds a new spin instead of the usual let's follow Derek and the others. The MC is also not reincarnated and has a mysterious past that is slowly being revealed through small clues.

Waifu Alisson Argent or Malia Tate
Waifu Alisson Argent or Malia Tate
Waifu Alisson Argent or Malia Tate

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You succum to readers suggestion way to easily and it turns me off from reading 

Literally one dude just kept spamming to leave Malia for Stiles and give Stiles powers blah blah blah. And then you instantly remove Malia from ever having a relationship with MC

It’s worse because they don’t even stay together and break up in canon

You also even started to consider the giving powers to Stiles thing, which is another red flag. 

Idk if it’s just me, but giving powers to characters that never had any is just not enjoyable to read

A VERY COMMON occurrence for teen wolf fanfics is MCs having some sort of relationship with Allison but then they break up and she goes for Scott

Since you still have no idea what you want for the romance, and MC and Allison are being set up as a future couple, I can already see this happening…..Its so obvious 

Of course you haven’t written anything like this yet, and you might not have fully decided yet. You could still possibly leave Allison and MC together or keep Stiles human ~ but you still easily just left Malia out the window after literally ONE guy asked for it. So I dont have much hope really

I don’t care for who MC ends up with, I just hope it isn’t a MESS of relationships. Unfortunately I already lost interest 


I really liked your Legacies ff tho

Just wanted to give my honest view of this story. It has the potential to be one of the best if not the best Teen Wolf Webnovel. The main character actually has depth and substance opposed to a lot of other stories where the main character is just added into the friendship of Stiles and Scott. 

The story that goes on as teen wolf unfolds in unique. While the main story that we all know and love takes place, you expand on the whole world. You added your own flavour/flair that doesn’t subtract from the overall story. 

Keep up the good work, love your work. 

Eh its ok, nothing special. Its pretty slow paced and boring, not much of anything unique is happening. And, the MC is kinda uhh i guess annoying.

None of that really matters to me though, my main issue is the character interactions and dialogue which are just so robotic and fake. 
Im sure the author will get better the more he writes. 

very good story hope it continues to be updated 










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I've been watching this story for some time now and honestly I can say checking every day to see if you dropped a chapter that's how you know this story is good that's how you know it's great if you don't mind I would really like it if you continue 😁👍

first of all brillant narration .....kinda pretty good story till now....updates also kinda consistent....I you won't let allison die and his close ones also....cause that's a serious let down..........and about the romance I would have hoped him with allison...really....Malia can be the pair but allison can be somewhat friends with benefit now and later a love interests and I am sure Malia can be made to believe as well....anyway it's my personal opinion...byeeee

autor esta bien hasta ahora, solo diré que soy mas del bando de harem, por mi que el MC se quede con todas las chicas o al menos con las favoritas.
author is fine so far, I'll just say that I'm more of the harem side, for me the MC stays with all the girls or at least with the favorites.
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Very good fanfic, this very good please author-sama don't stop the story 👌.

Very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good very good. 

The story is well written, has been well planned and seems to flow well. Need to read some more for now before making an accurate review but so far the story has been impressive. Overall a good read.

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Infelizmente a história provavelmente não tera um novo capítulo, triste eu sei particularmente eu tenho uma grande queda por Malia e acho poucas ( 2 com essa  ) histórias que tenha ela como par do leitor, foi realmente muito bem encaixado os eventos, saindo do genérico de seguir o Scott ou estar fazendo tudo que ele faz na série, uma das coisas que fez eu gostar da história foi que Mc não foi um 2# Scott ou o Stiles já que tem muitas histórias que fazem o Mc ser uma copia dos dois amigos e fazendo os eventos que tem na série mudando o Scott e Stiles para serem personagens secundários, vom tudo eu fortemente recomendo ler essa obra muito boa, mas fique o aviso de que quando você terminar de ler a história você vai ficar querer mais e não vai ter. 

Dude pick up on this story please…. It has a very good plot🥂

Teen Wolf :- A Wolf's Journey.

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