Trim_2cool

United States

your first novel is good i mean very good maybe you think it is not enough but that 44 chapter is intrigued me to no end and that story can go to top on villain mc i wish this mc has a some quality and reasonable mentality and what is synopsis this very confusing yet amazing political and GOT vibes

Obligatory 5 stars since the first novel you pushed out was genuinely one of my most favorite novels due to how the protagonist and the entire story all in all operated. I haven't as of yet started reading this novel, Which I would be doing now and I hope it's as good as your first if not better. Good luck and please don't drop this one as I have very high expectations from the title and the summary. ^^

This book is worth your time.

Writing Quality: the author writes with a great degree of knowledge. Few issues can be found and the writing pulls you in. Very good at getting your attention.

Updating Stability: as of writing this a chapter hasn’t been posted in three months. I can only hope this ingenious masterpiece hasn’t been dropped. Author even in past books has struggled to have a schedule and I hope that ends with the sucsess of this book being guaranteed in due time.

Story: multiple subplots and characters have been introduced that can keep the readers attention. The story is interesting and the powers of the MC are even better. The way magic works is unique and a special spin on the ”system” has been put in place. Very good.

Character: the main character has flaws. This is good. Character development is nessesary which is a positive in a story like this. I look forward to seeing how the MC and people surrounding him grows. The way the author describes characters is great and the powers are cool.

World: the authour made a map! An actual map! Devotion and hard work at its finest. Good job!

PLEASE DONT DROP! LOTS OF POTENTIAL.



I like this novel very much but so far(22 chapter) I can't say Iiked the MC. Story is good, started a bit dark, lots and lots of potential. But the MC is so immature that it is getting on my nerves. I mean he is 16 years old. I am not saying he should be a man but he should't be this childish at the very least. 
And secondly there are too much exlamations, "Gasp"s.
Apart from these two points everything is very good.

Plz, make this a novel and have an evil mc I am sick and tired of good and antihero MCs. Just make him indifferent to life or make him pursue his own benefits like Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity.

The Tomes of the Lost Mage