EmberBlood

Ok first of all I have read the current chapters and they are pretty engaging and fun to read.
The writing quality is good and I don't see any grammar errors.
The character interactions are fun to watch and I am interested in seeing where this story goes.
Though please add more chapters and set up regular updates.
There are too little chapters right now for a proper review.

The battle scene of the first chapter is quite vivid and the emotions at the end really touch the reader. It made me want to keep reading to find out what led to that point. The story is just beginning so the background of the world is still unclear, but I love how descriptive it is. It really draws you in. Great start!

First chapter overuses the Dont show, tell technique. If used properly it will be great. the second chapter is better than the first. Also add a bit of mystery to get the readers attention.

Hmm, interesting sorry but a lot of problems that need addressing.

Grammar needs some work. Words are often used in the wrong context. Puncuations marks are used incorectly in certain situations as well. 

Character design needs some work as well, on my first read I had no idea who the main character was.

There is only one chapter available so not much to say, as long as you work on those issues, I'm sure you will do great. I am not that great of a writer either, I make the same mistakes as well.  

Also if you have any trouble with editing ProWritingAid is a great tool. it will help you with your grammar and writing style. 

This is a temporary review so once more chapters are added, I will reread and change my review. Goodluck. 



I supposed to wait for another chapter, before I will give my review. However it seems the author needs more motivation to do so. Please add more chapters, because I can't  wait to know what's  next. What I like most in this book is the way it is written, the description and details, it's  just very good. Aside on how the story keeping me on the edge of my seat. So I'm  waiting for next chapter author sir please...

don't use many names in the story and what to say the story has 2 chapters rn.............so ATB to progress it.........when there are a pile of chapters to read i will be back

I like the story. Synopsis is pretty catchy and well-written. Use of words is also good and the story is to follow. I recommend reading this. 

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