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In the game ‘Yelany: Your Legacy,’ Damian White was just an NPC who mysteriously died after cheating on his yandere fiancée. 
And now I have transmigrated into his body.
Help me…
Please.
(Heavily Inspired by High Class Mob)

United Kingdom

Rereading my old writing makes me cringe, this’ll be rewritten soon with a similar premise, but a lot better imo. Writing that as a chapter is needed to delete a novel from your profile, which was what I was trying to do

Shameless author review time! What you can expect:
-yandere(obviously)
-1 FMC(I don’t do harem)
-Mage MC
-MC uses a Bow
- I’m not gonna post a few chapters and drop

Cons
-I’m a novice author
-MC uses a Bow(this might be a pro for some and a con for other, so I’ll put it in both)
-Only 3 chapters a week
-I have no clue what I’m doing

Hello aimzay from our site where u used to edit chapters .read till ch7 as of now and its pretty good.Name - Bookwormwithabook
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well, this is a good read. not gonna lie. writing quality is it's strongest point.the characters also have been well thought of. the story development tho is a little messy but can easily be overlooked. all in all, this book is great.

The writing is good but the story pacing is somewhat messed up. Overall, it's a good read. Also, please leave the author's note at the end of the chapter, Mr. Author. Many readers will get annoyed because of it.

The story needs to be developed slower, the pacing is kind of off, but overall it's such a gem. Although not entirely polished and needs some work, it still shines in its strong points like character development and design. Keep doing your best this is truly good. (Also, cover art is godly)
Cheers!

Read the whole book, and really it was great. It was the kind of book you won't stop reading and just keep going until you start begging for chapters.
So here I go, more chapters plzz author...
The characters feel wholesome, the plot feels good, and though I shouldn't say it this early in the novel but the world building feels great too, just make sure to keep it up author, and this will become a great work....

Good writing as far as I’ve read, though, I’d like to know more about the real world, as In like who the guy with the mask was? And the pod? Etc. But otherwise, the world building quite good the story seems promising, also I wish to know is the MC OP? 

Interesting so far . . . . . . . . . . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The Unsung Tale of The Trash Noble

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Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Last chapter