(scruffle to me sounds like some dudes havin a problem so deal with it I just made a new word, or not and it's just been there)
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4 Hours Later
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After they introduced themselves Leo and William soon began talking of the many things they knew of. soon the train was slowly coming to a stop to a massive city,
Leo and William soon reached the capital of the confederacy, Eldemune.
"damn this place really is huge"
"I told you, our city just can't compare to the massive Eldemune city, this place even has the best facilities in the continent though everything except for hospitals"
"amazing, but what's wrong with the Hospital?"
"well you see even if the confederation has access to the best things this continent could offer the Xing family has the best healers and facilities that make the capitals top hospitals look like dirt!"
"they're that great huh"
"yup they are pretty famous because of their healing capabilities!"
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after having more idle talk, the two eventually reached the gates of the Eldemune national academia.
huge streams of students and some with their parents or guardians. but soon a commotion was heard and from the looks of it, it was between a rich looking man and a beautiful girl, the girl had black hair with an oval face and captivating eyes and soft lips a curvy body and she seemed to be getting harassed by the rich man
"Come on girl, it's not everyday this young master takes a fancy to anyone you should just accept it and join me" said the rich man
brimming with confidence of himself, he had a uniform which seemed to be the schools official uniform with 2 red stripes likely indicating that he's a second year and an affinity to the fire element
"like I said, I REFUSE understand oh so great young master? or are you just so narcissistically boasting like your some big shot which you obviously look like some second generation snob" said the black haired beauty sarcastically while looking as disgusted and angry while being elegant, her words sounded like and angels but fierce words
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author: Somebody teach me some good one liners in insulting people
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"You!" the young man couldn't find the words to refute. as he himself had just stayed back a year because of his poor grades as he often goes to brothels and lazies around heck he even barely passed his first year, seeing no way to refute he directly grabbed the girls arm
and tried to drag her away 'whatever I'll just enjoy your body and dispose you!' confidently thought as he always got away scot free each time he got in trouble
little did he know that the girls family was none other than the Xing Family and she herself was a genius when it came to healing and has the holy magic attribute
naturally the school staff were also attracted thinking it's just some kids fighting but upon seeing who the young man was dragging they immediately stopped the man and dragged him inside the school
meanwhile Leo and William had long left to the admission center of the school unaware of such development
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I'd say i somewhat improved here but I'm still making experiments on a good way to make and impact and hook my viewers