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Chapter 1 - The most pathetic death

"I'm home!"

"Welcome home Kim, now go and do your homework up stairs. and when you finish come down to eat with us."

after hearing what he mom said he goes up stairs and does he's homework.

-Not even 10 minutes Later-

Kim stands in a white room and Infront of him is an angel.

"where am I?

I remember being in my room dying of boredom so how did I get here?"

after asking this question an angel appears Infront of him "your at the reincarnation room and you died of boredom.

and not gonna lie that's a really pathetic way to die. but at least you didn't get run over by a truck because we've had a lot of these."

after the angel finished speaking Kevin felt he's vision go black and then...pain lots and lots of pain

Kevin never felt this much pain In he's whole life.

"hahahahaha this is what you get for disrespecting me."

hearing the woman laughing so sadistically sends shivers down Kim's spine.

he wants to scream but he can't he's throat hurts to much he can't even cry because he's eyes are out of tears.

"please stop...please I want the pain to stop someone please save me..."

-30 minutes of hell Later-

"Vera feed him the healing pill"

"yes my lady"

Soon after hearing those words, he feels something being stuffed into he's mouth and then the injuries he had had disappeared along with the pain.

when Kim's body was done healing no one was in the room anymore.

"what the f*ck! just happened huh!?"

after saying that a huge amount of pain hit he's head giving him unfamiliar memories.

"Mana?, princess, insult?...

what are all these memories?"

after couple of minutes later Kim understands what is going on.

"sigh... what terrible sin did I commit to transmigrate in this world in this body!"

[System Loading]

1%

30%

69%

99%

100%

[Ding! loading complete would you like a tutorial on how to use the system?]

[Yes] [Yes]

seeing this Kevin regains he's hope on escaping this place with the systems help and since he doesn't have a choice he clicks 'Yes'

[The systems functions are:[Quests],[Inventory], [stats], [menu], [talents], [Shop].

The host only has to think [Quest] or other options and it will appear Infront of you]

Listening to the systems explanation Kim couldn't help but be interested in [talents]

" system how do I upgrade my talent?"

[You upgrade your talent by using 'Talent Point' or 'TP' for short.

You get TP by:Quests,achievements,etc...]

after hearing what he wants Kevin thinks about the [Stat Menu] appearing and a translucent blue screen appeared Infront of him.

[Stats Menu]

Name:Kim Pakal

Age:16

Status:Hungry, Thirsty, Cold, malnourished

Cultivation:Mortal

Talents-

Impurity Cleansing- Low Grade

Qi refining- Mid Grade

Qi absorbtion- Low Grade

Evaluation:Low grade Spiritual Root

Comprehension- Low Grade

_____________________________

Looking at his Cultivation talent he's surprised because by the memories of the original body only Females can cultivate.

"Hey system why are you showing me my talent for Cultivation if I can't Cultivate?"

[you can cultivate as well as other males species it just wasn't discovered how to.]

[Hint:Check inventory]

Seeing the systems answer and the hint he opened the system inventory.

[Inventory]

Low Grade Cultivation Technique [Learn]

______________

after clicking learn all the knowledge about the Cultivation technique entered he's mind.

"No wonder males couldn't cultivate. it's because of separating Qi from Mana.

females can absorb Mana without Cultivation techniques, cultivating will just be very slow and that's it.

but males Can't cultivate nor feel Qi without a Cultivation technique made FOR Qi,females can feel Qi but they can't absorb it so they think it's impurity."

"After undeestanding this information there was still one thing that was unanswered.

why did no one manage to create a cultivation technique that can cultivate Qi?

oh well the question will be left unanswered for now.

"System don't I just have to gather enough Qi to break through a realm what's with the Qi cleansing and refining?"

[Sigh. Host please don't base your knowledge of those cultivation novels you read, doing so is stupid.

in reality what you think is just the gathering of enough qi just to break through to the next realm is an infinitly complex system with all the cells in your body working together to Gather, Cleanse, and refine Qi.)

Hearing what the system said kevin decides to not base his knowledge on novels, only some surface level stuff.

anyways Kim started reviewing the knowledge he gained on how to cultivate.

1. Sit in a meditative position

2. start breathing in through the nose and out of the mouth

3. focus on one thing like the feel of your clothes or the temperature of the room your are in

4.start relaxing the body and mind but still focus on the thing you chose.

5. continue like this until you are in a zoned-out kind of state where you will only feel the chosen thing you focused upon.

6.Now this is where the cultivation technique comes in, adjust your breathing pattern to the technique you are using to cultivate

7.If done correctly you will start to feel something entering you.

8.according to the technique start directing the Qi towards your lungs

9.If done correctly the directed Qi in your lungs should be cleaned out of harmful substances.I

10.Now start directing the Cleaned Qi to the center of your stomach where it will be refined into something useful

11.let the refined Qi circulate in your bloodstream and wait for it to be absorbed by your cells

Kim started cultivating according to the technique.

[1 hour later]

After an hour of continoues cultivation Kim was immensly tired, he had to to concentrate his small malnourished body to cultivation which not only took a toll on his mind but also on his body

"phew, didn't think Cultivating would be so tiring and dangerous at the same time.

I almost don't feel anything when I cultivate which is quite dangerous if someone suddenly came into this prison cell."