Sachin_Kumar_1699

India

You have the skills to write a thrilling novel, but I don't see the grit to write more chapters, the hero is evil which is great, but remember to keep the maids away from him, make him a solitary person, don't give him too much power, better walk in a mean way, slowly climb to the top, must  To be like a fox, cunning and secretive, the important thing is the more cunning and evil the more fun, just keep going and don't stop, if you find it difficult to complete it, I advise you to use a novel like doulou dalu, overlord, then put your main evil character and keep changing the simple things, like this  It's easier, good luck

The writing I can handle but this story has so much potential, it gets more interesting on every chapter, just take your time and keep going with the story! Wow![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

all thing is great the characters , kaal and story line keep going interesting  you. all we want the story line and it's awesome ....keep doing the great work

Hello everyone author is here, its was my first time writing this. so if i made any mistakes try to ignore it. please enjoy a fun journey with kaal.

Kaal Journey